Many students have to live with roommates while going to school or university. I believe that a good roommate should have the following two qualities.
Firstly, a good roommate should be responsible. For example, he or she should help room clean or pay the bill on time every month. If roommate behaves irresponsibly, students must be disagree with many subjects.
Secondly, being free of any bad habits like smoking, gambling and drinking is a good roommate. It is often the fact that roommates with bad habits can influence others very fast as students spend most of theie time with them. As the result, they can have bad impact on their health, studying and characters.
In conclusion, being responsible and free of bad habits are two important qualities of a good roommate beacause he or she will make your life easier and have more fun.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: pkesf52513
Essay Categories
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 12.0772626932 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 22.412803532 54% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 30.3222958057 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 701.0 1373.03311258 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 144.0 270.72406181 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86805555556 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 4.04702891845 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65185957058 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 145.348785872 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645833333333 0.540411800872 120% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 419.366225166 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.498848331 49.2860985944 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8888888889 110.228320801 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 21.698381199 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 7.06452816374 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315510877276 0.272083759551 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147645348849 0.0996497079465 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145787209048 0.0662205650399 220% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212641124551 0.162205337803 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132110835533 0.0443174109184 298% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.3589403974 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.2367328918 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 63.6247240618 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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