Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
From the dawn of humanity, people have always been concerned about one significant element of their life that is food. In recent years, innovations have a tremendous impact on the cooking process and provide vast, novel technics and apparatus to this industry. Unlike some people that think these changes did not enhance the way people live, I believe that the quality of people’s lives has been improved drastically. Reasons to substantiate my viewpoint are elaborated upon hereunder.
The first and paramount reason is that with all the new technics of food preparation and machines like an oven, rice cooker, meat cooker, and etcetera, preparing food is became much convenient than the past, and it saves time. It is crystal clear that preparing food is a time-consuming activity, and for lots of people who hate cooking, it is a waste of their time, so new improvements always have been welcomed in this area. The fewer time people are spending on cooking, the more time they have to do other invaluable activities. As an illustration, my grandmother always tells me that they had to spend a great deal of time preparing food for the family. Having waked up, she had to bake bread by herself for breakfast. Every day she started with turning on the kiln, and she was preoccupied with the cooking all they long, so she did not have enough time to do anything else. Not only was it a time-taking process, but also it was a hard and burdensome function. If it weren’t because of the ever-growing technology, we would spend most of our time preparing food, these days.
Moreover, with the advancement in the way people can provide food for themselves, they care about the amount of nutrition they have to consume to be healthier, so they have a healthier lifestyle these days. No one can turn a blind eye on this preconception that in the past people tried their best to prevent hungriness and be alive, but now with huge innovation in agriculture and cooking, they pay more attention to their heath. Needless to say that the more the diet is healthy, the happier life people will have. For example, I have recently read an article in the local newspaper about the research that has been conducted at the University of Melbourne. The result of this research vividly showed that people tend to care about their diet much when the process of cooking becomes easier, and they have a tendency to cook a variety of foods too. This research illustrates how much our life improved by progress in the cooking process.
In brief, by taking into account all the aforementioned reasons, it seems that our life has improved by changes and radical innovations in preparing food. These developments have altered humanity’s life in a way that preparing food is not a time-consuming activity anymore, and people pay more attention to their diet to be healthier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, for example, in brief
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.4613686534 191% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 7.30242825607 219% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 22.412803532 254% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 30.3222958057 211% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 5.01324503311 219% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2369.0 1373.03311258 173% => OK
No of words: 488.0 270.72406181 180% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85450819672 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70007681154 4.04702891845 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74317747792 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 145.348785872 165% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491803278689 0.540411800872 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 740.7 419.366225166 177% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 3.25607064018 399% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.51434878587 528% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6744149437 49.2860985944 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.45 110.228320801 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4 21.698381199 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85 7.06452816374 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 4.33554083885 277% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210814824752 0.272083759551 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699510745978 0.0996497079465 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592613482341 0.0662205650399 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153444248055 0.162205337803 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039172033463 0.0443174109184 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.3589403974 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 63.6247240618 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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