One of the debating issue for offenders who had served their prison sentence and they have been free is society again is commit their crime again. But there are some measures that could be taken in order to tackle this important problem.
Firstly, the most significant point for prison sentences is that the government could have been able to rehabilitate the prisoners. By rehabilitation programs in prisons, the government has a chance to change offender’s mind and thoughts and also could work on their behavior order to give them another chance to be a positive person and also to gain more skills to have better opportunities after releasing from prison.
Furthermore, despite rehabilitation programs there is another measure to make these rates less in society is community service. Offenders could be able to work in the society but without any payment. As a result, they would feel useful and also good about themselves to work with others and also could be a chance for people to accept offenders to be back to society. Consequently, wrongdoers would be felt welcome by people so they will not have any harsh feelings about being back to community.
In conclusion, the government could be able to take some actions to deal with offending criminals after being punished. If offenders would be able to gain skills and abilities to have a job and also to be felt welcome by society they hardly go to commit a crime again.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 12.0772626932 8% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 22.412803532 36% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 1373.03311258 72% => OK
No of words: 201.0 270.72406181 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94527363184 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83155828716 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 145.348785872 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547263681592 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 419.366225166 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6069154964 49.2860985944 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.25 110.228320801 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.125 21.698381199 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06452816374 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274287672632 0.272083759551 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127020536544 0.0996497079465 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494816917836 0.0662205650399 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191631935983 0.162205337803 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312505172571 0.0443174109184 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.3589403974 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.8541721854 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.0289183223 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 63.6247240618 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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