Problem with archaeology study
In the reading part, the author represents the migration hypothesis of the one type of dinosaurs edmontosaurs because of the hard condition of wintertime in their habitats. however, the lecturer rejects the reading points by presenting some reasons and examples.
First of all, the author asserts that one of the most significant reasons of migrationg edmontosaurs is shortage of food in winter. because the raugh conidition of weather in winter prevent the plant of edmontosaurs habitats to grow easily. On the other hand, the professor claims that the summer of the edmontosaurs' habitat was more warmer than now and the north slope had the apporopriate angle of sunshine for growing the plants. Therefore, the vegetation of this area was abundant for animals. In addition, the professor adds the fact that the vegetation of the area could dye in the winter but the animals had the chance to feed from the nutrition that reminds from dead vegetation.
Moreover, in the reading part, the writer overloks the fact that the all animals that live in herbs might not have to migrate. The professor claims that there are several animals that live in herbs for other reasons such as more protectiong and covering from pradators. Furthermore, she presents an example to clarify this concept that Rosavel Elk is one of the herbs animals that live in forest of west United States however, don't migrate. Hence, living in the herbs could not be a vital factore to represent the animals can migrate.
Finally, the writer maintains that the physical traits of this animal represents that they were cable of migration. Conversely, the professor demonstrate that the adult generation of this aminal were capable to migrate but the juvinile and the younger one could slow the herbs. Thus, the herbs had to stay in the cold area.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 174, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...dition of wintertime in their habitats. however, the lecturer rejects the reading point...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 133, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...ntosaurs is shortage of food in winter. because the raugh conidition of weather in wint...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 133, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ntosaurs is shortage of food in winter. because the raugh conidition of weather in wint...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 330, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'warmer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: warmer
... summer of the edmontosaurs habitat was more warmer than now and the north slope had the ap...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 428, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...n forest of west United States however, dont migrate. Hence, living in the herbs cou...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, finally, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, in addition, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 30.3222958057 142% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1373.03311258 111% => OK
No of words: 302.0 270.72406181 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04635761589 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62438056707 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513245033113 0.540411800872 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 419.366225166 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9048135523 49.2860985944 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.857142857 110.228320801 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 21.698381199 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06452816374 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.3589403974 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.2367328918 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 63.6247240618 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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