Question :Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
From the dawn of human civilization, both education and teachers have been a significant part of human life. Not only can both of them affect every person, but also they can lead him or her toward being a prosperous person. It is a matter of debate among experts and other people whether it is better for teachers to make their social or political views known to students in the classroom or not. As far as I am concerned, I totally disagree with teachers talking to students about their social or political views for two important reasons.
First, some students are not mature enough; thus, they are not able to recognize whether something is true or false. Teachers are usually influential, and when they start to talk about their social or political views, some of them might be biased persons; it might affect students, most of whom figure out which views are logical. For intense, when I was in high school, we were close to the city representative election in my country. My teacher talked about his political view and then talked about his friend who was one of the candidates, and he encouraged us to vote for his friend regardless of whether his friend was a competent candidate or not. My teacher was very prejudiced about his friend. I did not know anything about this candidate; however, I voted for my teacher’s friend, and by doing so, I wanted to make him happy. Subsequently, I have realized that I made a mistake. It is obvious teachers how can influence their students.
Second, if teachers talk about their social or political views, it causes wasting time in the classroom. When teachers allocate time for their views in the classroom, by doing so triggers controversy in the classroom, which needs too much time; therefore, teachers should allocate time, of course, entirely for education. I would like to provide an example; In my English classroom, my teacher started to talk about some rebels which had started in different parts of my country. This caused a kind of discussion between the teacher and some students, other students, such as me, were not interested, and our time totally wasted. As a result, I believe that teacher should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom, which has not any advantage for students.
To sum up, in my view, teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom. It might harmful effects on students who are not mature; also, it causes wasting time in the classroom. I hope teachers spend time in the classroom totally on education and encourage their students to be productive in class; instead, they allocate time to their views.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, then, therefore, thus, kind of, of course, such as, as a result, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.4613686534 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 7.30242825607 274% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 22.412803532 263% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 30.3222958057 198% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2220.0 1373.03311258 162% => OK
No of words: 458.0 270.72406181 169% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84716157205 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.04702891845 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63554754604 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 145.348785872 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46288209607 0.540411800872 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 675.0 419.366225166 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 3.25607064018 645% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.51434878587 330% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2088406691 49.2860985944 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 110.228320801 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 21.698381199 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45 7.06452816374 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 4.33554083885 254% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278054402253 0.272083759551 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109467668489 0.0996497079465 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112274842602 0.0662205650399 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212866163425 0.162205337803 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645601311709 0.0443174109184 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.42419426049 89% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 63.6247240618 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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