The term endothermic meaning the animal can maintain the constant body temperature regardless of surrounding weather pattern. The reading passage tries prove that the dinosaur is endothermic animals but the speaker refutes the all the statements made in reading passage in following ways let see one by one.
Firstly, the reading passage says that the dinosaur was lived in the polar region with that extreme climate,so it is endothermic animal but the lecturer refutes this point by stating that the dinosaur used to migrate from the polar region during the winter season and moreover the fossil report never says that they lived during winter season.
Secondly, reading passage explains that the dinosaur's legs are present beneath body like other endothermic animals like mammals in order to to walk fast and pump the blood faster.Even though professor accept this point somewhat still he argues that this presence of legs beneath body is for the purposes bearing the it's weigh because it is very large animal and moreover heavy weight will not animal to run faster. So the dinosaur is not a endothermic animal.
Thirdly, the reading passage states that the dinosaur bone contains the Heaver son's canal so the dinosaur would be endothermic animal. But the professor explains this statements in contrast way the presence of this canal purpose is thicken the bone. Fossil reports says that this canal gets thicken during the warmer time and thinner during the colder time, meaning the dinosaur use to grow faster at warmer period than winter. so dinosaur can not be the endothermic animal.
To sum up, because the dinosaur migrated during the winter period in polar region, the purpose of legs being beneath body to support the body and the presence of ring canal in it's bone, professor conclude that the dinosaur is not a endothermic animal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'third', 'thirdly', 'in contrast', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.280235988201 0.261695866417 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.16814159292 0.158904122519 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.070796460177 0.0723426182421 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0501474926254 0.0435111971325 115% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0176991150442 0.0277247811725 64% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12389380531 0.128828473217 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0442477876106 0.0370669169778 119% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.47620034059 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0206489675516 0.0208969081088 99% => OK
Particles: 0.00294985250737 0.00154638098197 191% => OK
Determiners: 0.138643067847 0.128158765124 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0117994100295 0.0158828679856 74% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.0114777025283 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1888.0 1645.83664459 115% => OK
No of words: 304.0 271.125827815 112% => OK
Chars per words: 6.21052631579 6.08160592843 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.04852973271 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.417763157895 0.374372842146 112% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.319078947368 0.287516216867 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.174342105263 0.187439937562 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0789473684211 0.113142543107 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47620034059 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470394736842 0.539623497131 87% => OK
Word variations: 46.1369897618 53.8517498576 86% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0529801325 77% => OK
Sentence length: 30.4 21.7502111507 140% => OK
Sentence length SD: 118.092548452 49.3711431718 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 188.8 132.220823453 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4 21.7502111507 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 0.878197800319 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 3.39072847682 413% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 62.3078947368 50.5018328374 123% => OK
Elegance: 1.9 1.90840788429 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.431754547549 0.451937469235 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.215338407946 0.142949733639 151% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0826792799242 0.0787303798458 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.754482786979 0.631733273073 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.190780226709 0.139662658121 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.247107674652 0.21790590567 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902898386792 0.0871468918476 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.486138026144 0.414875509568 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.078977144459 0.0530846634433 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.332164088303 0.332364718235 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499351146763 0.0446026805963 112% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.26048565121 164% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.49668874172 86% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.62251655629 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 7.0 3.1766004415 220% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.2958057395 97% => OK
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Rates: 70.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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