reading passage says that psychology is a natural science that describes and explains the psychological and sensory aspect of human behaviour. moreover it explains that mental behaviour changes according to the physiological changes in the body that mean when there is changes in the chemical combination that leads to changes in the human behaviour.
first of all, reading passage suggests that the human behaviour can be measured by means of rate of reaction and reaction time all contributes to the human behaviour, so it is a psychology is natural science. but the lecturer claims that psychology is not natural science it's a social science because it is deal with the social, physical and environmental factor rather than the physiological according to the speaker point of view.
secondly, reading passage states that the human behaviour is objective thing, this behaviour can be measured in terms of rate of reaction and the reaction time. but the speaker refutes this statement by stating that the human behaviour is not objective , it's concern with subjective matters.
thirdly, reading passage claims that psychological has several sub field in it and it based on the biological and mental status of a individual.for that reading passage explains on example, the neuroscience field developed from by experimenting the rats and it's behaviour compare with human behaviour. but the speaker refuses this statement and he says that yes psychology is has several sub division but not base on the biological changes it's purely depends on the social behaviour .
so finally, the professor explains that all the psychological field are developed from the basis of social, physical and environmental factor which determine the human behaviour and not by the basis of biological phenomenon.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.238993710692 0.261695866417 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.160377358491 0.158904122519 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.122641509434 0.0723426182421 170% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0314465408805 0.0435111971325 72% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0314465408805 0.0277247811725 113% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12893081761 0.128828473217 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0408805031447 0.0370669169778 110% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.97292595001 2.5805825403 115% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0125786163522 0.0208969081088 60% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.11320754717 0.128158765124 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0062893081761 0.0158828679856 40% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0125786163522 0.0114777025283 110% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1840.0 1645.83664459 112% => OK
No of words: 285.0 271.125827815 105% => OK
Chars per words: 6.45614035088 6.08160592843 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.04852973271 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.424561403509 0.374372842146 113% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.375438596491 0.287516216867 131% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.249122807018 0.187439937562 133% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.171929824561 0.113142543107 152% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97292595001 2.5805825403 115% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 145.348785872 79% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.40350877193 0.539623497131 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 37.9612286288 53.8517498576 70% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0529801325 69% => OK
Sentence length: 31.6666666667 21.7502111507 146% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1028978908 49.3711431718 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 204.444444444 132.220823453 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6666666667 21.7502111507 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.11111111111 0.878197800319 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 3.39072847682 590% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 69.2105263158 50.5018328374 137% => OK
Elegance: 1.83098591549 1.90840788429 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.499484399755 0.451937469235 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.204030523608 0.142949733639 143% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.063994782308 0.0787303798458 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.798199820104 0.631733273073 126% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.101209664365 0.139662658121 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.314930656552 0.21790590567 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102925773162 0.0871468918476 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.466628204976 0.414875509568 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0458211706026 0.0530846634433 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.376244222311 0.332364718235 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504502642339 0.0446026805963 113% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.26048565121 94% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.49668874172 114% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.62251655629 28% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.1766004415 126% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.2958057395 87% => OK
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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