The reading passage and lecture are both about colonization of our solar system.The writer claim that, if we are willing to colonize solar system, Saturn’moon Titan, is a better place. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in article. He says, mars is still better for colonization than Saturn’moon Titan.
First, the author mentions that Titan has atomospher resemble to earth; atomospher, in addition it has a lot of amount of methan which is important for human being life. This point challenged by lecturer, he states that, even Mars warmer than Titan, and Titan has a low pressure like earth, however these are not important, this is because, the astronomers can not go outside, furthermore, they always wear space suits. In addition, the human being need water for their life more than methanand both of them have alittle oxygen.
Second, the author argues, Titan has low gravity than Mars. This argument rebuted by professor, he believes that if human being settles on Titan, this will deteriorate his heart, furthermore will effect his health negatively.Therefore there is no benefite from low fuel need to go to the Titan.
Finally, the writer points out, despite Titan is firther away from earth, but this distance will be not important compare with a low rocket fuel. In the other hand the professor mentions, long distance need long time, moreover faraway distance make difficulty in communication, in addition to a lot of supplement need, which make in logical to go to the Titan.
Second, the author argues,
The reading passage and lecture are both about colonization of our solar system.The writer claim that, if we are willing to colonize solar system, Saturn’moon Titan, is a better place. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in article. He says, mars is still better for colonization than Saturn’moon Titan.
First, the author mentions that Titan has atomospher resemble to earth; atomospher, in addition it has a lot of amount of methan which is important for human being life. This point challenged by lecturer, he states that, even Mars warmer than Titan, and Titan has a low pressure like earth, however these are not important, this is because, the astronomers can not go outside, furthermore, they always wear space suits. In addition, the human being need water for their life more than methanand both of them have alittle oxygen.
Second, the author argues, Titan has low gravity than Mars. This argument rebuted by professor, he believes that if human being settles on Titan, this will deteriorate his heart, furthermore will effect his health negatively.Therefore there is no benefite from low fuel need to go to the Titan.
Finally, the writer points out, despite Titan is firther away from earth, but this distance will be not important compare with a low rocket fuel. In the other hand the professor mentions, long distance need long time, moreover faraway distance make difficulty in communication, in addition to a lot of supplement need, which make in logical to go to the Titan.
Second, the author argues,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.01324503311 219% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1373.03311258 93% => OK
No of words: 252.0 270.72406181 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08333333333 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76350927212 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59126984127 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 419.366225166 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.3227765099 49.2860985944 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.454545455 110.228320801 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 21.698381199 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.06452816374 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36754396698 0.272083759551 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151197959782 0.0996497079465 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.209173942583 0.0662205650399 316% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205197560795 0.162205337803 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.306285396025 0.0443174109184 691% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.3589403974 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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