Rembrandt is the most famous of the seventeenth-century Dutch painters. However, there are doubts whether some paintings attributed to Rembrandt were actually painted by him. One such painting is known as attributed to Rembrandt because of its style, and indeed the representation of the woman’s face is very much like that of portraits known to be by Rembrandt. But there are problems with the painting that suggest it could not be a work by Rembrandt.
First, there is something inconsistent about the way the woman inthe portrait is dressed. She is wearing a white linen cap of a kind that only servants would wear-yet the coat she is wearing has a luxurious fur collar that no servant could afford. Rembrandt, who was known for his attention to the details of his subjects’ clothing, would not have been guilty of such an inconsistency.
Second, Rembrandt was a master of painting light and shadow, but in this painting these elements do not fit together. The face appears to be illuminated by light reflected onto it from below. But below the face is the dark fur collar, which would absorb light rather than reflect it. So the face should appear partially in shadow-which is not how it appears. Rembrandt would never have made such an error.
Finally, examination of the back of the painting reveals that it was painted on a panel made of several pieces of wood glued together. Although Rembrandt often painted on wood panels, no painting known to be by Rembrandt uses a panel glued together in this way from several pieces of wood.
For these reasons the painting was removed from the official catalog of Rembrandt’s paintings in the 1930s.
The passage claims that the painting "Potrait of an Ederly woman in a White Bonnet" is not painted by the famous painter rembrandt as it has many eroor and doesnot match the charater with the other paintings of him he was well known for. The passage provides mainly three reasons to support its claim. however, the lecturer refutes the claim that the painting was painted by the Rembrant from the recent detail analysis of the painting and provide each reason to negate the easons taken by the passage.
first of all, the passage claims that the women in the paintaing dressed inconsistent which directly conflicts the rembrandt style of the paintaing. however, the lecturer says that later investigation finds that there is layer on the top of the painting which hide the originality of the paintaing. he added that fur collar of the woman in the paintaing is exactlt matched after the layer was removed by the analysis through x-ray. Again, it is also hypothesized that the fur collar may have been added hundred years after the painting to attract the aristocracy of that time to buy it in higher price.
Secondly, the lecture says that the painting also supports the act of balance shadoe and light as does other painting of the rembrandt. On removing the top layer of the painting we can finds that the face of the woman in the painting is not in the shadow as decribed in the passage of its refusal to be rembrandt work.
Lastly, contary to the passage, the painting have been painted in the the single piece of the wood which is prevalent in rembrandt work. he added that the additional layer most be placed by the other s after painting has created to make it very garndiose. Then, it is concluded that the additional glue work is not the orginal nature of the painting. Therefore, this fact also waeken the claim of the passage that it is not rembrandt work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 30.3222958057 152% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1373.03311258 113% => OK
No of words: 330.0 270.72406181 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70909090909 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48119650333 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 145.348785872 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457575757576 0.540411800872 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 419.366225166 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.449381313 49.2860985944 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.538461538 110.228320801 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3846153846 21.698381199 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06452816374 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317571446673 0.272083759551 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118835042365 0.0996497079465 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084785281229 0.0662205650399 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215954721037 0.162205337803 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674031639998 0.0443174109184 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.3589403974 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 53.8541721854 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.2367328918 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 63.6247240618 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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