The speaker argues that the decrease in population of otters can be better attributed to predators with proper evidence. In his first statement, he points to a fact not mentioned in the passage saying that there were no dead otters washing up on the shores which would have been the case had these otters died of any disease due to reduced immunity levels. Since there were no such bodies of either otters or seals washing up he believes that these animals were eaten.
According to the passage, orcas are the only sea creatures with the ability to disrupt the ecosystem in the levels observed and it says that they hunt for whales and don't go behind small creatures. But the speaker states that the population of whales has gone down over the years due to hunting and these orcas are left with no other choice but to prey on smaller creatures. To support his argument he talks restates the uneven pattern in population decline in a different fashion. He mentions that regions which are shallow did not see a decline in population because the orcas could not reach their prey but in places with deep waters, they observed a decline in population and effectively casting his doubts on the passage.
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- People who are the most deeply committed to an idea or policy are also the most critical of it.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In deve 75
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- The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In d 50
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...d it says that they hunt for whales and dont go behind small creatures. But the spea...
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Line 3, column 459, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a different fashion" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...he uneven pattern in population decline in a different fashion. He mentions that regions which are sha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 1373.03311258 72% => OK
No of words: 210.0 270.72406181 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71428571429 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35482810827 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 145.348785872 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580952380952 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 419.366225166 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0662251656 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 21.2450331126 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.172814931 49.2860985944 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.428571429 110.228320801 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 21.698381199 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06452816374 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.09492273731 49% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122520023637 0.272083759551 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554228540237 0.0996497079465 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0148412449606 0.0662205650399 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898573375166 0.162205337803 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0106178376724 0.0443174109184 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.3589403974 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 53.8541721854 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.0289183223 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 12.2367328918 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 63.6247240618 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.498013245 133% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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