smart cars
The lecturer talks about various aspects of the smart cars that challenge the advantages mentioned in the passage.
Firstly, it is not decisively clear if the smart cars can perform as good as they are expected to. There is enough evidence that the technology can fail sometimes. And when the technology in a smart car fails, the consequences can be costlier as compared to that of a conventional car. Since smart cars will be closed packed in a city, breakdown of even one car can lead to pileing up of a large number of cars in the vicinity.Furthermore, there is no evidence suggesting less drivers will be injured in the case of smart cars. This scenario contradicts the passage that states there will be a decrease in the number of accidents when smart cars are used.
Secondly, history has shown that every time a new convenience has been introduced into a car, more people are likely to use cars. In a similar manner, with introduction of smart cars, there will be more people diriving on the road which will eventually lead to traffic congestion. This observation implies that the traffic issues will not recede as predicted in the passage.
Finally, contrary to the reduction in the maintainence cost of a smart car as stated in the passage, the techonologies used in a smart car like the GPS, sensors, etc will be of high cost. The cost for reparing advanced technology will be more than the offsetted cost, thus increasing the maintainence cost overall.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...if the smart cars can perform as good as they are expected to. There is enough ev...
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Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...fails, the consequences can be costlier as compared to that of a conventional car....
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Line 3, column 390, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... even one car can lead to pileing up of a large number of cars in the vicinity.Furthermore, there...
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Line 3, column 429, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
... a large number of cars in the vicinity.Furthermore, there is no evidence suggesting less d...
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Line 3, column 474, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun drivers is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ermore, there is no evidence suggesting less drivers will be injured in the case of ...
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Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "In a similar manner" with adverb for "similar"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ar, more people are likely to use cars. In a similar manner, with introduction of smart cars, ther...
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Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...manner, with introduction of smart cars, there will be more people diriving on th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 1.0 7.30242825607 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 22.412803532 45% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1373.03311258 89% => OK
No of words: 253.0 270.72406181 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82213438735 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89073626217 2.5805825403 112% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 145.348785872 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529644268775 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 419.366225166 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7423615084 49.2860985944 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.909090909 110.228320801 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 21.698381199 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 7.06452816374 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.488515366858 0.272083759551 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.217006909292 0.0996497079465 218% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.171459882011 0.0662205650399 259% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.304741082634 0.162205337803 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137122223724 0.0443174109184 309% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.3589403974 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.8541721854 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.2367328918 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 63.6247240618 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.