Some people believe that the earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
After the industrial revolution, human activity increased. many resource helped them to develop their life and improve their situation. they not only made progress, but also made the earth a better place for living. some people believe that these achievements facilitate our life and they can help us to focus on other important things. On the other hand, some people contend that human activity leads to destruction of the environment. Although our behavior can destroy the earth,I agree with the first group. I contend that we need to change our lifestyle to protect the earth without stopping human activity. I will elaborate on my opinion in the next paragraphs.
Nowadays, industrial development has not only made life easier but also lead to a change in lifestyle. many people who live in metropolises have a private car and use it for going to work and other places. this lifestyle and behavior increase air pollution, especially in the winter semester when we have an air inversion phenomenon. So, we don’t have any way except to change our lifestyle and accept some of the hardships. For example, every 24 car-occupants are equal to one bus. it is a simple individual way for protecting the earth. we have many pollution days in Tehran, and recently the government has decided to persuade people to pursue alternate means of transport on Thursdays—without their private car. On this day, all the buses are free and subway as well as bicycle sharing services are cheaper. it is definitely more difficult to use public transportation; but, the air will be cleaner.
it goes without saying that since the industrial revolution, coal has played an important role in progress and a lot of non-renewable energy is consumed by industries, cars and peoples. In recent decades, the earth has been damaged by coal consumption, and it had a lethal effect on the earth. All of the governments should either decide to change their industrial systems and approach renewable energy or witness the destruction of the earth. China is known as the largest producer of carbon dioxide in the world and they face air pollution and many other respiratory diseases, and they have decided to develop solar plates and improve their system by 2030.
In short, all of the reasons lead us to the conclusion that, if we and governments can change our behavior, in all of the factors that will destroy the earth, we will have both technology and clean earth. Finally, I suggested that everybody try to persuade people to use green energy and change their lifestyle.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, well, for example, in short, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 7.30242825607 301% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 22.412803532 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 30.3222958057 171% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.01324503311 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2140.0 1373.03311258 156% => OK
No of words: 427.0 270.72406181 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01170960187 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.04702891845 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8203858986 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 145.348785872 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512880562061 0.540411800872 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 671.4 419.366225166 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 3.25607064018 369% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 13.0662251656 176% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7570637682 49.2860985944 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0434782609 110.228320801 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5652173913 21.698381199 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04347826087 7.06452816374 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 4.19205298013 358% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 4.33554083885 300% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199607517871 0.272083759551 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600213277892 0.0996497079465 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552673241685 0.0662205650399 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124286781043 0.162205337803 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719307966541 0.0443174109184 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.3589403974 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 63.6247240618 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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