species in danger should be save
The article states that saving dangered species it is not beneficial and provide three reasons of support. However, the professor explains that contrary as the author says the extincted species should be prevented.
First, the reading states that it is an exageration that extinction of animals would lead to disaster in the planet. The professor refutes this point by standing that after loss of the dinosaurious were a shift in organism and a great number of species that were lost, produce alterations in the ecosystem. As a result, it is important preserve the species as the professor mentions.
Second, the article claims that scientics not longer depend on nature as a resource because of advances of technology, However, the professor contends that nature plays an important role in medicine. He says that fourty percent of prescription drugs are made using plants and if any of the plant species become extincted medicine are losing a great amount of drugs.
Third, the reading avers that saving species is very expensive. The lecture opposes this point by saying that saving species from extinction offers benefits to the economy. He mentions that these species that are saved maintain the job of many people in United States , that is why that remaining species as many others deserve to be safe.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: A_GREAT_NUMBER_OF_NN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'species'?
Suggestion: species
...shift in organism and a great number of species that were lost, produce alterations in ...
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Line 3, column 385, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the species as the professor mentions. Second, the article claims that scienti...
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Line 5, column 368, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ine are losing a great amount of drugs. Third, the reading avers that saving spe...
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Line 7, column 268, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... the job of many people in United States , that is why that remaining species as m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, third, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 1373.03311258 80% => OK
No of words: 215.0 270.72406181 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12093023256 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59149695764 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 145.348785872 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553488372093 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 419.366225166 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6659825818 49.2860985944 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.1 110.228320801 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 21.698381199 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06452816374 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355797880723 0.272083759551 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134638595515 0.0996497079465 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102109648487 0.0662205650399 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217664617888 0.162205337803 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.167377268351 0.0443174109184 378% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.3589403974 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.