submarine detects an odd sound in the ocean.
Both the reading and the listening passage discuss a fascinating topic pertaining to weird sounds that be heard in the North Atlantic and the Arctic Ocean. The author of the reading passage states that submarines are not able to detect the source of the sounds because it seems to be moving with great speed and agility. However, the listening section brings into question the reading points by providing different reasons for support.
First of all, the author argues that this sound is generated by ocra whales to accomplish a lovely ritual; in contrast, the professor opposes this view by mentioning that the whales are living near the surface of the ocean, but submarines are almost circulate in the deep ocean. As a result, it is unlike that submarines could not find this sounds. Clearly, a disparity exists between the article and the evidence exhibited by the professor.
Secondly, the article puts forth the idea that the special feature of giant squids which has a soft body with no skeleton does not let submarines be aware of their presentence. conversely, this point is challenged by the lecturer. According to the professor, giant squids keep living in the ocean from the past and they have been detected by submarines for one decade so it is impossible that they do not recognize it for 20 years.
Finally, the author mentions that the resource of this sound may be foreign submarines that are secretly patrolling the area. The lecturer, on the other hand, states that a submarine is not able to redirect the path without creating noise, so the sonar system can easily detect it. Moreover, the lecturer believes that submarine is not enough fast in order to be silent when it wants to perform a mission or patrols in the ocean.
In summary, while both the passage and classroom discussion provide interesting information with regards to the resources of the odd sounds in the sea, the lecturer effectively casts doubt on all of the claims presented in the reading.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 251, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'circulated'.
Suggestion: circulated
...of the ocean, but submarines are almost circulate in the deep ocean. As a result, it is u...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 178, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Conversely
...bmarines be aware of their presentence. conversely, this point is challenged by the lectur...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 193, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...the lecturer effectively casts doubt on all of the claims presented in the reading.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, in contrast, in summary, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 30.3222958057 145% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1373.03311258 122% => OK
No of words: 336.0 270.72406181 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97023809524 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57115298347 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 145.348785872 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550595238095 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 419.366225166 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9425959408 49.2860985944 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.461538462 110.228320801 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8461538462 21.698381199 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2307692308 7.06452816374 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309471560869 0.272083759551 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918220578107 0.0996497079465 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600929796166 0.0662205650399 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153271867889 0.162205337803 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040267069768 0.0443174109184 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 63.6247240618 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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