Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how the proposal discussed in the lecture would solve the specific challenges described in the reading passage.
The author of the article claims that maintaining a human presence on Venus would be impossible.In the lecture, however, the professor challenges the mentioned view and discounts all the reasons, by putting forward the idea that we can establish a station 50 Km above the Venus' surface.Then he discusses three main reasons as follows.
First, he explains that 50 km above the Venus' surface the pressure is equal to normal like Earth pressure; hence, there is no danger od crush.This opposes the reading which mentioned that almost anything humans might land on Venus would be crushed.
Second, he describes since the planet's atmosphere is made up mostly of carbon dioxide and nitrogen we can produce water. Again this refutes the passage which stated that there are no reservoirs of water on Venus and regular supply of water is impractical.
Third, he says a station above the cloud can make use of both direct sunlight and clouds reflection to produce electricity.This contradicts the article which asserted that humans can not get electricity to power their machines and equipment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...n presence on Venus would be impossible.In the lecture, however, the professor cha...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Then
...a station 50 Km above the Venus surface.Then he discusses three main reasons as foll...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...ure; hence, there is no danger od crush.This opposes the reading which mentioned tha...
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Line 5, column 32, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'planets'' or 'planet's'?
Suggestion: planets'; planet's
...shed. Second, he describes since the planets atmosphere is made up mostly of carbon ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...louds reflection to produce electricity.This contradicts the article which asserted ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, second, so, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 30.3222958057 63% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 1373.03311258 67% => OK
No of words: 177.0 270.72406181 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18079096045 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 4.04702891845 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7614580127 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 145.348785872 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64406779661 0.540411800872 119% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 419.366225166 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 13.0662251656 38% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 21.2450331126 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.3866487515 49.2860985944 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 183.4 110.228320801 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.4 21.698381199 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06452816374 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103006739581 0.272083759551 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509700122032 0.0996497079465 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435399882397 0.0662205650399 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0582451425158 0.162205337803 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406373496365 0.0443174109184 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 13.3589403974 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 53.8541721854 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.0289183223 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.2367328918 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.42419426049 116% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 63.6247240618 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.7273730684 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.498013245 152% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.2008830022 187% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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