Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading passage. You have 20 minutes to type your response.
Nowadays in our modern society, there are a lot of zoos in different places of the world. In human sight, zoos are the one of the most popular place for spending time.
Although scintists declare that zoos may be dangerous for animals. Some believes that animals shouldn’t be used just for intertainement aspects and they can be useful for educational purpose too. In some cases, animals die because of poor attention and condition in zoos. That can be one of visiouse things that human could do just for their spending times.
On the other hand, some admitted that zoos are the survivors of the endangered animals. As everybody knows in our new world we destroys a lot of wildlife and pllute natural sources for relief of our lives. So in this case a lot of animals spicious began to extinct. Zoos play a very important roll in saving this spisious. It can be better if we use this for our educational aims.
So there are advantages and disadvantages for zoos. Its goods that we try to decline worse part and work hard in advantages terms. In that case, we can help either animals and human worlds.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...tention and condition in zoos. That can be one of visiouse things that human could...
^^
Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'destroy'
Suggestion: destroy
... As everybody knows in our new world we destroys a lot of wildlife and pllute natural so...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 1373.03311258 67% => OK
No of words: 196.0 270.72406181 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68367346939 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.04702891845 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5595571449 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 145.348785872 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 419.366225166 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 21.2450331126 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.9360246008 49.2860985944 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.5714285714 110.228320801 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.0 21.698381199 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21428571429 7.06452816374 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0336291397756 0.272083759551 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0113714275758 0.0996497079465 11% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.01950110468 0.0662205650399 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0175575033072 0.162205337803 11% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239766288456 0.0443174109184 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.3589403974 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 53.8541721854 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 12.2367328918 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.42419426049 88% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 63.6247240618 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.498013245 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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