In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
Living longer is an important subject for people all over the world. Each year, a lot of scientists do various researches among this topic because people always wish to be eternal and enjoy their endless life beside their family. Some people believe that in recent years the length of human life increase rather than past. Others hold an opposite opinion. In my view, nowadays, people live longer than before for two remarkable reasons.
First, in today’s life, human is living longer because of improving in health condition. There are a lot of diseases and microbes that threat the health of people, by developing the science in recent decades, we could know different types of microbes and their treatments. Therefore, people can prevent of disease, and the level of health condition increasing. For example, I saw a documentary about the health issues in Africa. It showed that in past the level of the health condition was low and people had no knowledge about necessary medical information. Even, there was neither hospital nor primary health equipment for treating ill persons. Each year, large number of people suffer from diseases like Polio, and Malta fever which today can treat easily. Moreover, many pregnant women die or left their infants because of lack of medical equipment and inappropriate health condition. At the end of the documentary, a table of results clearly showed the increase of human age against improving health condition through recent years. As you can see, if there had been better health condition, past people would live longer.
Second, improving type of nutrition leading to longer human's life. Different source of nutrition, either vegetarian or meat, containing large amount of vitamins, protein, and minerals. When people feed from variety of foods, their body requirements are responded. As a result, people have healthier body that cause longer life. For instance, when I was in university, I studied food industry. For one of my courses, I should do a project about kind of feeding in past time. After using a lot of reliable sources, surprisingly, I noticed that potatoes and tomatoes, at first, were considered to be poisonous. Therefore, for several years, people deprived themselves from these nutrient foods. However, today, people know that potato and tomato contain a lot of vitamins and antioxidant which boost body against cancer. Also, I observed a study that showed for healthy body you need to balance your diet through feeding pyramid. Among study's investigation, in past people ate foods to full their stomach and didn't pay attention to its nutrient value, but today, addition to concerning to kind of foods, people use various sort of supplements to balance their diets. More attention to diet providing healthier body and longer life. This experience proved to me that better feeding leads to increase life length.
In conclusion, today, people can live longer than past. Not only does better health condition increase the length of human’s life, but type of nutrition also has noticeable effect on it. I think people should pay more attention in their health if they want to have longer life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, kind of, sort of, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 52.1666666667 155% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2668.0 1977.66487455 135% => OK
No of words: 514.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1906614786 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76146701107 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59581561691 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529182879377 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 810.0 618.680645161 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2666262649 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.064516129 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5806451613 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.03225806452 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157294034547 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472908801704 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046342674498 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108755964292 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229972745372 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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