Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they opposes the specific points made in the reading passage
According to the reading passage, printed encyclopedias are better than online encyclopedias because online encyclopedias have many problems. However, the professor in the lecture opposes reading’s suggestions and refutes each of its points.
First of all, the professor argues that we will never be able to find really comprehensive reference work accurately on reading or on online encyclopedias. However, factual material can easily be corrected online but in case of reading encyclopedia these errors remain for decades. Therefore, the reading’s claim that traditional encyclopedias are usually written by trained experts and it is hard to find any errors in them is not true.
Second, the professor challenged that online encyclopedias are reliable, because most of the crucial facts in them, are in read only format and hackers cannot make changes in these articles. Besides this, they hire special editors who monitors these changes made to the article and eliminates those which are malicious. This disputes the reading which claims that online encyclopedias are unreliable because hackers and other users can make changes in them.
Finally, the professor states that traditional encyclopedias have limited space and decision for choosing the topics in them, is in the hands of groups of academic people, who don’t add diverse in articles, and as a result not many people attracted to read them. On the other hand, online encyclopedias have diversity of topics which is the strongest advantage of these encyclopedias.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The extended family(grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles.) is less important now than it was in the past. Use specific examples and reasons to support your answer. 70
- The widespread use of the internet has given people access to information on a level never experienced before How does this increase in the availability of information influence life in today s world 88
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 65
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The most important factor that influences students success in school is a good teacher. 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is more important to work at a job that you enjoy even if the salary is low than it is to have a high paying job that you do not enjoy It is more important to work at a job that you enjoy 60
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, however, really, second, so, therefore, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1373.03311258 96% => OK
No of words: 236.0 270.72406181 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58898305085 5.08290768461 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04690187425 2.5805825403 118% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 145.348785872 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567796610169 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 419.366225166 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.55342163355 116% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2221663875 49.2860985944 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.9 110.228320801 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 21.698381199 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4 7.06452816374 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0895783929951 0.272083759551 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423734497841 0.0996497079465 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277935245435 0.0662205650399 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0570675186002 0.162205337803 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242383105468 0.0443174109184 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.3589403974 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 53.8541721854 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.0289183223 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.2367328918 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 63.6247240618 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.7273730684 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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