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Both the author and speaker talk about the possibility of human settlement on the Venus. In the reading passage, the author explains the impossibilities condition whereas the author opposes the author's opinions by giving the various evidence.
First, the author says that by the extreme atmospheric pressure, the spacecraft cannot be landed because the pressure crushes the spacecraft. On another hand, the speaker claims that we can settle the floating spacecraft that certainly solves the atmospheric problem. Thus, the speaker disagrees with the writer.
Second, the author claims that the water should be imported from the earth because the Venus surface, as well as atmosphere, do not have the water. On contrary, the speaker says that the other gases like carbon dioxide, nitrogen present on the Venus can be converted into the water. So, there is no compulsion to import the water from the earth. Hence, the speaker also disagrees with the writer.
Third, the author expresses the view about the sunlight on the planet's surface. By the author, the Venus reflected the sunlight and the by the thick cloud, enough light cannot reach on the surface. However, the speaker says that the think could is not so thick and a considerable amount of light can be reached on the surface. Also, the speaker says that by using the solar panel, we can collect the two direction light which is useful. Thus, the speaker does not support the author opinion.
In conclusion, in the reading passage, the author explains the impossibilities condition whereas the author opposes the author's opinions by giving the various evidence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 230, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...surface. However, the speaker says that the think could is not so thick and a considerabl...
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Line 7, column 246, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
..., the speaker says that the think could is not so thick and a considerable amount ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, second, so, third, thus, well, whereas, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 22.412803532 40% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1373.03311258 100% => OK
No of words: 264.0 270.72406181 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18181818182 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55440121452 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469696969697 0.540411800872 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 419.366225166 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 14.0 8.23620309051 170% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4846805736 49.2860985944 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2 110.228320801 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 21.698381199 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06452816374 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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