The reading passage explains the problems with online communal encyclopaedias but the lecturer refutes the all statements made in the reading passage in the following ways. Let us see this statements one by one.
Firstly, the reading passage says that the communal encyclopaedias doesn't have the academic credential, so there is more chance of error to occur. But the speaker states that the traditional encyclopaedias are printed version and moreover having only one original copy will be available for the future reference, but in the communal encyclopaedias there no such kind problems because it can be modified or update up to date through online. But traditional one can't be comprehensive and can not correct if there is a mistake.
secondly, the reading passage suggests that the communal encyclopaedias easily be manipulated by hacker and the y can fabricate the contents as the like, But the professor contrast this statements my sating that this read only formate so no one can hack it or manipulate.That is highly impossible according to the professor. And moreover it all organized by well trained professional editors.
Thirdly, reading passage claims that the individual thought may be dominate on their contents and they may bias their statements. But the speaker states that the traditional encyclopaedias contents are determine by space availability and the individual interest but in communal encyclopaedias the space is not a issue at all and further more we can see great diversity for a single word.
Finally, the speaker states that the communal encyclopaedias having great advantages when compare with the traditional encyclopaedias.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'well']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.221052631579 0.261695866417 84% => OK
Verbs: 0.154385964912 0.158904122519 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0982456140351 0.0723426182421 136% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0491228070175 0.0435111971325 113% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0315789473684 0.0277247811725 114% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0947368421053 0.128828473217 74% => OK
Participles: 0.0350877192982 0.0370669169778 95% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.23359537562 2.5805825403 125% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0105263157895 0.0208969081088 50% => OK
Particles: 0.00350877192982 0.00154638098197 227% => OK
Determiners: 0.136842105263 0.128158765124 107% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0315789473684 0.0158828679856 199% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0105263157895 0.0114777025283 92% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1701.0 1645.83664459 103% => OK
No of words: 260.0 271.125827815 96% => OK
Chars per words: 6.54230769231 6.08160592843 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.04852973271 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.415384615385 0.374372842146 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.353846153846 0.287516216867 123% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.257692307692 0.187439937562 137% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.153846153846 0.113142543107 136% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23359537562 2.5805825403 125% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 145.348785872 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515384615385 0.539623497131 96% => OK
Word variations: 49.3775767073 53.8517498576 92% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0529801325 77% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 21.7502111507 120% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.585151635 49.3711431718 186% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 170.1 132.220823453 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 21.7502111507 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.3 0.878197800319 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 3.39072847682 472% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 61.3846153846 50.5018328374 122% => OK
Elegance: 1.49253731343 1.90840788429 78% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.478020523101 0.451937469235 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.132867085081 0.142949733639 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.109039478428 0.0787303798458 138% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.661467408989 0.631733273073 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.250119585626 0.139662658121 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.230458543928 0.21790590567 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.162638408684 0.0871468918476 187% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.414693182131 0.414875509568 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0402550484021 0.0530846634433 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.346817442631 0.332364718235 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818658139888 0.0446026805963 184% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.26048565121 23% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.49668874172 57% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.62251655629 138% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.1766004415 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 10.2958057395 68% => OK
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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