The lecturer disputed the ideas that it a mission to mars would be impossible because of its long distance away from earth. He asserts that difficulties facing this mission could be resolved through several means.
First,The lecturer argues that hydroponic cultivation can overcome the difficulties of carrying large amount of food in the trip. The author claims that it is impossible to carry large amount of food which is needed for the trip. However, the lecturer notes that through hydroponic cultivation, it is possible to grow food in water instead of soil, Therefore, this technique save space and will minimize the amount of food needed on the trip. ,Moreover, plants will take carbon dioxide in the air and release oxygen which is needed for breathing.
Second, through exercise and calcium and vitamin D intake it is possible to overcome the negative effect of zero gravity on the health of astronauts. The author claims that a long trip to Mars would cause atrophy to muscle to muscles and bones. Again, the lecturer contends, that with regular exercise and with Calcium and vitamin D intake, it is possible to overcome the negative effect of zero gravity on Mars even it the trip is too long.
Finally, the lecturer states that damaging effect of radiation is true only when the sun is active. Therefore, a detector could be place on the spaceship to detect when is the sun is active. Having a detector on the spaceship would allow scientists to build a small shielded compartment for astronauts to stay in when the sun is active. Thus, this will not increase its weight.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , The
...resolved through several means. First,The lecturer argues that hydroponic cultiva...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... the amount of food needed on the trip. ,Moreover, plants will take carbon dioxid...
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Line 6, column 378, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hus, this will not increase its weight.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1373.03311258 96% => OK
No of words: 269.0 270.72406181 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9219330855 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55566407382 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 145.348785872 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472118959108 0.540411800872 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 408.6 419.366225166 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6344786728 49.2860985944 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.846153846 110.228320801 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 21.698381199 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 7.06452816374 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0816640967072 0.272083759551 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031682659939 0.0996497079465 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381012114905 0.0662205650399 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0562855404502 0.162205337803 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462669121595 0.0443174109184 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.3589403974 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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