tp08 the accuracy of Chevalier de Seingalt's memoir
The lecture apparently refutes the point illustrated in the reading material. According to the professor, though memoirs cannot be completely correct, Seingalt's memoir is quite reliable and contains historical sources. On the contrary, the reading contends an opposite stands that several critics had raised doubts about the accuracy of the memoir written by Chevalier de Seingalt.
The first point the professor uses to cast doubt on the reading is that wealth demand to take time by converting their products into money, and the process might take a few days while Seingalt travels to Switzerland so that he demands to borrow money as his cash ran out, which differs from the statement in the reading is that although the memoir records that he was quite wealthy and spend a huge amount of money in parties and gambling, evidence has shown that he borrows money from a merchant while he was in Switzerland, which support the statement of distorting and inventing the events of his memoir and make his life more exciting.
Another evidence the speaker adopts to contradict the passage is that there was proof that Seingalt took down notes every night he had conversations with Voltaire owing to the evidence of notes and journals that assist Seingalt to finish his memoir. However, the reading states that the impossibility of him to capture and remember the details and exact parses of the conversation with Voltaire many years after doubts the accuracy of Seingalt's memoir.
In conclusion, the point made in the lecture contrasts with what is presented in the reading. As the professor claims, there are no records show that there were prisoners who obtain more powerful friends than Seingalt to bribe the prison to release them, moreover, the records which show that people demand to repair Seingalt's ceiling after he left the prison to strengthen the accuracy of his memoir, whereas the reading material holds that people consider it is more likely for Seingalt to ask his friend to bribe than escaping the prison by using a piece of metal to cut a hole in his ceiling and climb through the roof in Venice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, whereas, while, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 30.3222958057 175% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1767.0 1373.03311258 129% => OK
No of words: 354.0 270.72406181 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99152542373 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51119775076 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 145.348785872 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528248587571 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 419.366225166 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 21.2450331126 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 196.943480154 49.2860985944 400% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 220.875 110.228320801 200% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.25 21.698381199 204% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.25 7.06452816374 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260164083364 0.272083759551 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123458574797 0.0996497079465 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104228931072 0.0662205650399 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173485388367 0.162205337803 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101817213014 0.0443174109184 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.2 13.3589403974 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.28 53.8541721854 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.0289183223 175% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.55 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.42419426049 114% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 63.6247240618 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.498013245 187% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.2008830022 179% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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