Both the reading and listening are about policy require companies to offer four day workweek insteas of five day work week.
First, according to the reading the four day work week will improve the work quailty and enhance the company profit. However, the professor refutes this point by explaining that the four day work week policy will force the companies to spent more money. He illustrates that compnies woll need to hire more workers, which will cost them more money for the training and providing health benefits. As, the health benefits are same for the four days workweek as the five days work week. Second, the new workers will cost the company money to buy more offices and more computers, which will cut into the company profit.
Second, the article states that the new policy will help the countery by decreasing the rate of the employment. Nevertheless, the lecture contradicts by discussing that as mentioned before hiring new workers and offering new jobs will be costly for the companies. As a result, companies will find other options as offering overtime for their employees. Moreover, they may increase the expectations that the five day workweek will be finished in the four days work week. As the employees will do the same amount of work of the five days at four days.
Third, the author avers that the new policy will provide more free tiime for the empolyees which can help them to enhance their life quality. On the other hand, the listening opposes this idea by claiming that the more free time will be risky for the empolyees. It can decrease their quailty of life, because their job stabilization will be decreased. It will increase their chance to loss their jobs. In addition, companies will prefer the five days work week for the manager poistions to have full coverage and supervision of the work. Consequantely, their oppotuinties to advance their careers will be lowered too.
Therefore, the professor quetions all the notions mentioned on the reading.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
...r day workweek insteas of five day work week. First, according to the reading t...
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Line 7, column 471, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...be finished in the four days work week. As the employees will do the same amount o...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'third', 'in addition', 'as a result', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.292682926829 0.261695866417 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.138211382114 0.158904122519 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.059620596206 0.0723426182421 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0216802168022 0.0435111971325 50% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0379403794038 0.0277247811725 137% => OK
Prepositions: 0.10298102981 0.128828473217 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0379403794038 0.0370669169778 102% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.46456915831 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0243902439024 0.0208969081088 117% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.121951219512 0.128158765124 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0514905149051 0.0158828679856 324% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00813008130081 0.0114777025283 71% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2000.0 1645.83664459 122% => OK
No of words: 335.0 271.125827815 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.97014925373 6.08160592843 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.04852973271 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.316417910448 0.374372842146 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.265671641791 0.287516216867 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.170149253731 0.187439937562 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.107462686567 0.113142543107 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46456915831 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 145.348785872 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468656716418 0.539623497131 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.450952684 53.8517498576 88% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0529801325 138% => OK
Sentence length: 18.6111111111 21.7502111507 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8053751798 49.3711431718 56% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.111111111 132.220823453 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6111111111 21.7502111507 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.722222222222 0.878197800319 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.39072847682 59% => OK
Readability: 45.1782752902 50.5018328374 89% => OK
Elegance: 2.19178082192 1.90840788429 115% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.56166773436 0.549887131256 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.172751576135 0.142949733639 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.115777755942 0.0787303798458 147% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.629954987571 0.631733273073 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.180944620567 0.139662658121 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.272300520609 0.266732575781 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960862328695 0.103435571967 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.445103876037 0.414875509568 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.144854760083 0.0530846634433 273% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.377963807387 0.40443939384 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.099817463191 0.0528353158467 189% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.26048565121 164% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 3.49668874172 172% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.62251655629 28% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 7.0 3.1766004415 220% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.2958057395 136% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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