The article states that allowing the employee to work for four days a week would profitable to company’s capital and economy as whole and provides three reasons to support. However, the professor explains that it will not affect the economy or could not be beneficial to company considering some major aspects of that scheme and refutes each of author’s reasons.
First, the reading claims that giving employee three holidays a week mean four working day can increase company’s profit and worker would feel rested and alert, company can hire new staff to get work done. The professor refutes this point by saying that it will not raise the profit of company due to the additional costs that they need to put. He states that as the company recruit new workers and make large worker group, they would need more money for their training and medical insurances. Moreover, the additional cost like purchasing computers, dresses for new staff cut from the profit. And he also conveys that in the worse case scenario, company could come up with high expectation from employees for
Second, the article posits that four day workweek would benefit individual employees as they could afford some extra time over extra money. The professor opposes this point by claiming that the more free time one has the more risks they could face in career. He states that leisure time could affect badly on job stability of the employee. He also points out that it could also harm their chances of advancement of career. Lastly, he emphasis the argument that company management would have five to days to supervise and it could pile up pressure on them as they would have to manage the worker shift more deliberately.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 715, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...with high expectation from employees for Second, the article posits that four day...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 10.4613686534 10% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 5.04856512141 376% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1373.03311258 104% => OK
No of words: 288.0 270.72406181 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95833333333 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45133970678 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 145.348785872 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 419.366225166 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0392797377 49.2860985944 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.818181818 110.228320801 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1818181818 21.698381199 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 7.06452816374 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.438939299292 0.272083759551 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156049631902 0.0996497079465 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113394676294 0.0662205650399 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30382161277 0.162205337803 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187918485627 0.0443174109184 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 63.6247240618 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.7273730684 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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