The lecture casted a doubt on 3 points made in the passage that decrease the salary and diminish the workday five to four. All of the argument involving the benefits of this to company and employees have been refuted by the professor.
First, the professor made a counterclaim to the result that diminish the workday will increase the profit of company. The lecturer argued that the company will hire a lot of more employees to make up thier jobs. As a result, costs of things would be same with five workday.
Second, the passage stated that the diminishing workday would decrease the amount of unemployment. In contrast, the lecturer iterated the point that unemployment. However, due to the cost the company would probably ask thier employees to overtime to make up a difference of job.
Third, the passage pointed towards that workers will have more free time, so they fell more rested and alert. As a result, thier ability will increase a lot. While acknowledging this, the professor also talked about this topic. Diminishing the workday will decrease the employer's ability on thier work. Because of that they can not make up the difference of job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 124, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
... and diminish the workday five to four. All of the argument involving the benefits of this...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ertime to make up a difference of job. Third, the passage pointed towards that ...
^^^
Line 7, column 271, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employers'' or 'employer's'?
Suggestion: employers'; employer's
...minishing the workday will decrease the employers ability on thier work. Because of that ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 304, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...se the employers ability on thier work. Because of that they can not make up the differ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, third, while, in contrast, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 10.4613686534 19% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 22.412803532 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 1373.03311258 70% => OK
No of words: 196.0 270.72406181 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93367346939 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.04702891845 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59494330134 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 145.348785872 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510204081633 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.0 419.366225166 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1934527045 49.2860985944 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.3846153846 110.228320801 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0769230769 21.698381199 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06452816374 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23043859553 0.272083759551 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827553813851 0.0996497079465 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664374413234 0.0662205650399 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153338477918 0.162205337803 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459783810871 0.0443174109184 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.3589403974 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.8541721854 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.0289183223 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 12.2367328918 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 63.6247240618 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.