The article states that based on mandatory policy working a four-day workweek in stead of five-day would increase the companies benefit. However, the professor explains none of the author’s reasons are convincing and refutes them one-by-one.
To begin with, four-day workweek would increase company profits cause employees feel more relax and comfort. Thus, they do their jobs correctly with fewer errors, as the reading states, is refuted by the professor. He asserts that by adding new workers company forced to hire more office space and computers. This manner provides additional costs for company and does not have enough profit.
Furthermore, according to the essay, by offering this procedure employees can reduce their unemployment rates. However, the professor argues that employ a new worker is costly .in addition, it could raise the employees’ expectation to do five-day works in four days.
At the end, based on author’s opinion, four-day workweek would improve the quality of lives cause employees who could get lower wage in stead of work hard in five days of week have more time to spend for their family. In contrary, the professor shows that four-day workweek could be risky and in this way employees can not promote in their careers because their bosses want from them to work five-day workweek.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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The article states that based on mandato...
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...tory policy working a four-day workweek in stead of five-day would increase the companies b...
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...vincing and refutes them one-by-one. To begin with, four-day workweek would i...
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...any and does not have enough profit. Furthermore, according to the essay, by ...
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...n to do five-day works in four days. At the end, based on author's opini...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, so, thus, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1129.0 1373.03311258 82% => OK
No of words: 212.0 270.72406181 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32547169811 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64640298069 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 145.348785872 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627358490566 0.540411800872 116% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 419.366225166 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4028800888 49.2860985944 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.9 110.228320801 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 21.698381199 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06452816374 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.526373038506 0.272083759551 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199768410084 0.0996497079465 200% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126588995956 0.0662205650399 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.315228091657 0.162205337803 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0903358247328 0.0443174109184 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.3589403974 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.2367328918 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.42419426049 111% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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