The reading passage and lecturer both are discussing certain approach to new projects which is now routine.
The lecturer also cast doubt on reading passage and author's claims about team work.
First of all, the reading a passage believes that a team has so many talents and expertise. The lecturer states that some team members ask for free ride from group as a whole and they do not contribute really much in a group. Everybody is seeing group as a whole.
Secondly, the author mentions the group will move more quickly he argues that it is bbecause they are so many group members.The lecturer rebuts this argument ;for example if the group don't move there is no one to blame because the group divide the responsibility between them.
Finally, the author mentions that there are always some influential people who have a voice in the group if the group achieve success they will progress but if the group did .On the other hand the lecturer said because they are inflencial some group members change their mind and everyone is to blame.
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Essay evaluation report
are discussing certain approach to new projects which is now routine.
are discussing certain approaches to new projects which are now routine.
are discussing certain an approach to new projects which are now routine.
the reading a passage believes that
from the reading a passage believes that
the reading of a passage believes that
if the group don't move
if the group doesn't move
Sentence: Secondly, the author mentions the group will move more quickly he argues that it is bbecause they are so many group members.The lecturer rebuts this argument ;for example if the group don't move there is no one to blame because the group divide the responsibility between them.
Error: bbecause Suggestion: because
Sentence: Finally, the author mentions that there are always some influential people who have a voice in the group if the group achieve success they will progress but if the group did .On the other hand the lecturer said because they are inflencial some group members change their mind and everyone is to blame.
Error: inflencial Suggestion: influential
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
Read a good grammar book.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 19 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 7 12
No. of Words: 183 250
No. of Characters: 842 1200
No. of Different Words: 106 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.678 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.601 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.273 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 55 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 43 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 23 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 7 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.143 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 16.583 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.714 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.469 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.776 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.255 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 36, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... First of all, the reading a passage believes that a team has so many talents...
^^
Line 6, column 125, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...bbecause they are so many group members.The lecturer rebuts this argument ;for exam...
^^^
Line 6, column 185, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...this argument ;for example if the group dont move there is no one to blame because t...
^^^^
Line 8, column 174, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... they will progress but if the group did .On the other hand the lecturer said beca...
^^
Line 8, column 176, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
...hey will progress but if the group did .On the other hand the lecturer said becaus...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'really', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'for example', 'first of all', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.270833333333 0.261695866417 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.182291666667 0.158904122519 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0572916666667 0.0723426182421 79% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0625 0.0435111971325 144% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0416666666667 0.0277247811725 150% => OK
Prepositions: 0.109375 0.128828473217 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0208333333333 0.0370669169778 56% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.32762634204 2.5805825403 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.015625 0.0208969081088 75% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.140625 0.128158765124 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0104166666667 0.0158828679856 66% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0104166666667 0.0114777025283 91% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1049.0 1645.83664459 64% => OK
No of words: 181.0 271.125827815 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7955801105 6.08160592843 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 4.04852973271 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.32044198895 0.374372842146 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.237569060773 0.287516216867 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.138121546961 0.187439937562 74% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0497237569061 0.113142543107 44% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.32762634204 2.5805825403 90% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 145.348785872 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602209944751 0.539623497131 112% => OK
Word variations: 55.8457601952 53.8517498576 104% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0529801325 54% => OK
Sentence length: 25.8571428571 21.7502111507 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 94.5815704532 49.3711431718 192% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 149.857142857 132.220823453 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 21.7502111507 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.71428571429 0.878197800319 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.39072847682 147% => OK
Readability: 49.6140489345 50.5018328374 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.4 1.90840788429 73% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.513876462483 0.549887131256 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.227110568342 0.142949733639 159% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.125204927452 0.0787303798458 159% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.807913362001 0.631733273073 128% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.2435088764 0.139662658121 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.255561133913 0.266732575781 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908059630299 0.103435571967 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.312713925178 0.414875509568 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.154536668364 0.0530846634433 291% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.303526800183 0.40443939384 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795483869552 0.0528353158467 151% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.26048565121 23% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.49668874172 114% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.62251655629 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.1766004415 31% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 10.2958057395 68% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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