It is stated that the results of a work being done by a team is always better, in comparison to when done by an individual. However, as per the lecture, when a company carried out an exercise in which the work was delegated to team, the observations and results were quite contradictory.
As per the paragraph, it is mentioned that, when a work is undertaken by a group rather than an individual, it is benefitted from the wider knowledge and ideas of several people. However, practically it was observed that not all the group members contributed and few were having a free ride.
It is mentioned that, a problem gets done more quickly when tackled as a team due to the collective effort. But, as per the lecture it is stated that a project got delayed significantly as the members of the group were unable to a reach to a consensus collectively, thereby causing delays.
Another advantage of working as a team is division of work. Unfortunately, as per the lecture, it was not observed. Some people in the group were not contributing and moreover, it was also observed that some group members became more influential as compared to others. Thus, most of the crucial decisions were taken by these influential members rather than forming a collective decision. In addition, group members who tried to find faults with the decision were shunned by the other group members.
Most importantly, the members who were actually contributing in helping to solve the problem felt bad, as the recognition went to the entire group rather than an individual. Hence, they felt disturbed when they saw the group members who didn’t even contribute a bit getting the same recognition
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'thus', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.1875 0.261695866417 72% => OK
Verbs: 0.196875 0.158904122519 124% => OK
Adjectives: 0.059375 0.0723426182421 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.08125 0.0435111971325 187% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.03125 0.0277247811725 113% => OK
Prepositions: 0.125 0.128828473217 97% => OK
Participles: 0.084375 0.0370669169778 228% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.90619529076 2.5805825403 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.028125 0.0208969081088 135% => OK
Particles: 0.003125 0.00154638098197 202% => OK
Determiners: 0.1375 0.128158765124 107% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.0158828679856 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.028125 0.0114777025283 245% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1684.0 1645.83664459 102% => OK
No of words: 285.0 271.125827815 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.90877192982 6.08160592843 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.04852973271 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.333333333333 0.374372842146 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.287719298246 0.287516216867 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.171929824561 0.187439937562 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.129824561404 0.113142543107 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90619529076 2.5805825403 113% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 145.348785872 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480701754386 0.539623497131 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.3869814328 53.8517498576 86% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0529801325 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.9230769231 21.7502111507 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5851266074 49.3711431718 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.538461538 132.220823453 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 21.7502111507 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.769230769231 0.878197800319 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.39072847682 0% => OK
Readability: 50.6950067476 50.5018328374 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.28282828283 1.90840788429 67% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.562835692083 0.549887131256 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.164081825045 0.142949733639 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0686838570075 0.0787303798458 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.638641277719 0.631733273073 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.165363087411 0.139662658121 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.259422190832 0.266732575781 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788827725267 0.103435571967 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.385502285334 0.414875509568 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0189272163807 0.0530846634433 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.38822740214 0.40443939384 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394628356528 0.0528353158467 75% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.26048565121 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 3.49668874172 172% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.62251655629 166% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.1766004415 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 12.0 10.2958057395 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.