TPO-03 - Integrated Writing Task Rembrandt is the most famous of the seventeenth-century Dutch painters.
The article states that there are strong reasons, which claims that a painted tableau, which is considered as one of the Rembrandt's paintings, is not a work of him. The author provides three reasons of support. However, the professor explains that new experiments have shown that this painting is also a work of this famous seventeenth-century Dutch artist. She refutes each of the author's reasons.
First of all, the reading claims that the dress of the woman, who depicted in the picture has a serious contradict. The hat, which was used by rich people on that time with the dress of poor people. The professor refutes this opinion by saying that there are some additional items which had been drew on the original painting. The woman's hat is one of those items and removing them has shown experts that the original painting is the thing, which is expected from Rembrandt.
Secondly, the article posits that the lights and shadows on the picture are completely different from other works of this professional artist and painted in a definitely amateur manner. However, the professor says that the original painting has approved us something opposite of this view. According to the professor, excluding the added items shows us the lights and shadows are as expected as the thing that we see in his other works.
Third, the reading says that while all of the Rembrandt's works have a non-glued panels, this glued panel would be from this painter. The professor opposes this point by explaining that this panel is another thing which is added by someone else. We also learn that the person who did this additional actions on this painting tended to show this more valuable than its real value.
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Sentence: However, the professor explains that new experiments have shown that this painting is also a work of this famous seventeenth-century Dutch artist.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to seventeenth-century and Dutch
Sentence: According to the professor, excluding the added items shows us the lights and shadows are as expected as the thing that we see in his other works.
Description: The fragment items shows us is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace shows with verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Sentence: However, the professor explains that new experiments have shown that this painting is also a work of this famous seventeenth-century Dutch artist.
Error: seventeenth-century Suggestion: seventeenth century
Sentence: Third, the reading says that while all of the Rembrandt's works have a non-glued panels, this glued panel would be from this painter.
Error: non-glued Suggestion: tongued
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No. of Words: 288 250
Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Number of Paragraphs: 1 4
Minimum three paragraphs wanted
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 20 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 14 12
No. of Words: 288 250
No. of Characters: 1379 1200
No. of Different Words: 141 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.12 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.788 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.474 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 90 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 72 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 43 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 24 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.571 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.748 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.351 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.351 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.137 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 4