The reading states that there are some problems with the painting that suggest it could not be a work by Rembrandt and provides three reasons of support. However, the professor states that even though the reasons are partly true but after a thorough examination it will be understood that the painting is indeed a work by Rembrandt and refutes each of the author's reasons.
First, the article states that there is an inconsistency in the painting which makes it impossible to be a work by Rembrandt. The professor says that the fur collar mentioned in the article was not an original part of the painting and it was added to it about 100 years later. He states that somebody did it to increase the value of the painting.
Second, the author states that Rembrandt was a master of painting light and shadow but in this painting these elements do not fit together. The lecturer claims that in the original painting the fur collar would reflect light and illuminate the face. She adds that the light and the shadow are realistic just as expected.
Third, the reading claims that the examination of the back of the reading indicates that it was painted on several pieces of wood glued together which is not what Rembrandt usually did. The lecturer contends that the painting is enlarged to seem more grand and more valuable, but the original one was drawn on a single wood and it was portrayed exactly on the wood of the same tree which Rembrandt always used to record his art of painting.
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- TPO-15 - Integrated Writing Task The cane toad is a large (1.8 kg) amphibian species native to Central and South America. It was deliberately introduced to Australia in 1935 with the expectation that it would protect farmers' crops by eating harmful insec 78
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- TPO-03 - Integrated Writing Task Rembrandt is the most famous of the seventeenth-century Dutch painters. However, there are doubts whether some paintings attributed to Rembrandt were actually painted by him. One such painting is known as attributed to Rem 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, second, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 1373.03311258 89% => OK
No of words: 262.0 270.72406181 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68702290076 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44409552532 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 145.348785872 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477099236641 0.540411800872 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 367.2 419.366225166 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.5540449482 49.2860985944 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.8 110.228320801 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 21.698381199 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 7.06452816374 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.501813973752 0.272083759551 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.209634118914 0.0996497079465 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113410876505 0.0662205650399 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.311393512404 0.162205337803 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709899463106 0.0443174109184 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.2367328918 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.42419426049 89% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 63.6247240618 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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