Reading and lecture have contradict idea about if dinosaurs were endotherm or not. Author expresses three evidences to establish they were endotherm but professor refutes all them and argues against ability of dinosaure to keep their body temperature in a constant level.
First, for refuting of first reading reson that says finding dinosaurs fossils in a cold area such as polar region shows they could conserve their body temperature in a determine degree, professor states when dinosaur went to polar areas those region were warmer than what they are today. She also continues when the polar land weather turned cold dinosaurs migrated to warmer areas.
Second, author says having legs under body is a endotherms characteristics and for dinosaur this allow them to run and have sustain activities. In the lecture professor refutes this and expresses reason of being legs underneath dinosaurs body were to maintain dinosaur wight.
Third, author states Haversian canals in nerves and blood vessels of endothermic animals cause they grow rapid, on the other hand exite of this canals in dinosaur bones show they were endotherm. Professor argues there are growth rings in the bones of dinosaurs that some of them show rapid grow other ring shows slow grows and the rest rings shows no grow according to the their thickness. She states this growth rings show dinosaur were not endotherm animals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'contradicted'.
Suggestion: contradicted
Reading and lecture have contradict idea about if dinosaurs were endotherm ...
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Line 2, column 168, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ould conserve their body temperature in a determine degree, professor states when dinosaur ...
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Line 2, column 239, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this region' or 'those regions'?
Suggestion: this region; those regions
...tates when dinosaur went to polar areas those region were warmer than what they are today. S...
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Line 3, column 47, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
..., author says having legs under body is a endotherms characteristics and for dino...
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Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'sustained'.
Suggestion: sustained
...inosaur this allow them to run and have sustain activities. In the lecture professor re...
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Line 4, column 260, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e growth rings in the bones of dinosaurs that some of them show rapid grow other ...
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Line 4, column 370, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
...e rest rings shows no grow according to the their thickness. She states this growth rings...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'third', 'such as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.316666666667 0.261695866417 121% => OK
Verbs: 0.195833333333 0.158904122519 123% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0833333333333 0.0723426182421 115% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0208333333333 0.0435111971325 48% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0541666666667 0.0277247811725 195% => OK
Prepositions: 0.1 0.128828473217 78% => OK
Participles: 0.0333333333333 0.0370669169778 90% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.4376676052 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0291666666667 0.0208969081088 140% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.075 0.128158765124 59% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00416666666667 0.0158828679856 26% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0166666666667 0.0114777025283 145% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1397.0 1645.83664459 85% => OK
No of words: 226.0 271.125827815 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.1814159292 6.08160592843 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.04852973271 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.37610619469 0.374372842146 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.256637168142 0.287516216867 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.185840707965 0.187439937562 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.137168141593 0.113142543107 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4376676052 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 145.348785872 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561946902655 0.539623497131 104% => OK
Word variations: 53.6446026139 53.8517498576 100% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0529801325 69% => OK
Sentence length: 25.1111111111 21.7502111507 115% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.7291486911 49.3711431718 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.222222222 132.220823453 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1111111111 21.7502111507 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.878197800319 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 3.39072847682 206% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 50.7748279253 50.5018328374 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.66153846154 1.90840788429 87% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.514250708551 0.549887131256 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.165664104963 0.142949733639 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0759547915034 0.0787303798458 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.665255780279 0.631733273073 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.142373353219 0.139662658121 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.217553249289 0.266732575781 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867712239581 0.103435571967 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.180516142867 0.414875509568 44% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.033811339981 0.0530846634433 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.309238775556 0.40443939384 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771450348036 0.0528353158467 146% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.26048565121 23% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.49668874172 143% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.62251655629 83% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.1766004415 31% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.2958057395 87% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.