In terms of whether fuel-cell engines will probably soon replace internal-combustion engines, the reading and listening are contradictory to each other.
First, the writer makes the point that hydrogen is a better fuel source than oil because it is infinite. However, the speaker demonstrates a different idea that hydrogen is technologically difficult to produce and store. For example, the liquid state of hydrogen should be kept at an extremely low temperature.
Second, contrary to the belief in the reading passage that hydrogen-based fuel cells will solve pollution problems, the lecturer says that although the hydrogen powered cars will not pollute, the burning of coals and oils that produce the hydrogen will make pollution to the environment. .
Finally, the author states that fuel-cell engines are cheaper than internal-combustion engines. In contrast, the speaker refutes that fuel-cell engines are expensive, because they are made by a kind of precious metal. There are no other cheaper materials that can replace this metal.
- TPO-05 - Integrated Writing Task As early as the twelfth century A.D., the settlements of Chaco Canyon in New Mexico in the American Southwest were notable for their "great houses," massive stone buildings that contain hundreds of rooms and often stand th 60
- TPO-19 - Integrated Writing Task Many consumers ignore commercial advertisements. In response, advertising companies have started using a new tactic, called “buzzing." The advertisers hire people,buzzers,who personally promote (buzz) products to people 40
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- TPO-05 - Integrated Writing Task As early as the twelfth century A.D., the settlements of Chaco Canyon in New Mexico in the American Southwest were notable for their "great houses," massive stone buildings that contain hundreds of rooms and often stand th 76
- TPO-06 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 93
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...will make pollution to the environment. . Finally, the author states that fuel-c...
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Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'for example', 'in contrast', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.258426966292 0.261695866417 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.140449438202 0.158904122519 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.112359550562 0.0723426182421 155% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0393258426966 0.0435111971325 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0112359550562 0.0277247811725 41% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123595505618 0.128828473217 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0112359550562 0.0370669169778 30% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.16225295478 2.5805825403 123% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0224719101124 0.0208969081088 108% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.11797752809 0.128158765124 92% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0337078651685 0.0158828679856 212% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0112359550562 0.0114777025283 98% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1042.0 1645.83664459 63% => OK
No of words: 160.0 271.125827815 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.5125 6.08160592843 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 4.04852973271 88% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.45 0.374372842146 120% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.36875 0.287516216867 128% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.2375 0.187439937562 127% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.1375 0.113142543107 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16225295478 2.5805825403 123% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 145.348785872 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.539623497131 116% => OK
Word variations: 57.3026663894 53.8517498576 106% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0529801325 69% => OK
Sentence length: 17.7777777778 21.7502111507 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.6362491553 49.3711431718 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.777777778 132.220823453 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 21.7502111507 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.878197800319 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.39072847682 29% => OK
Readability: 54.6527777778 50.5018328374 108% => OK
Elegance: 2.05882352941 1.90840788429 108% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.658892860991 0.549887131256 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.107197893817 0.142949733639 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0925509798695 0.0787303798458 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.630674638522 0.631733273073 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.283265265192 0.139662658121 203% => Sentences are changing often in a paragraphs.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.264833412758 0.266732575781 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156217742637 0.103435571967 151% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.224587012596 0.414875509568 54% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.116942512557 0.0530846634433 220% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.419349153994 0.40443939384 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362841152738 0.0528353158467 69% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.26048565121 47% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.49668874172 86% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.62251655629 83% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.1766004415 31% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 10.2958057395 68% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.