The reading and the lecture are both about the building of the settlements of Chaco Canyon in New Mexico in the American Southwest, which was known as a great houses, '' massive stone buildings that contain hundreds of rooms. The author of the reading believes that there is three theories about the utilization of those large buildings. The lecturer casts doubt on the claims made in the article. He thinks that all the evidence about the using of the large buildings is not convincing.
First of all, the author claims that the large houses was used as a residential places that contains hundreds of peoples. He believes that the Chaco house is looks like the "apartment buildings" at Taos. This point is challenged by the lecturer.
He says that if there is a hundreds of people were living in the great houses, that means a hundreds of fire should be there for cooking and the other life activities. Furthermore, she points out that there is only ten fires which will not support a hundreds of peoples needs.
Secondly, the author mentioned the using of the chaco houses as a food storage places. The grain maize was one of the stored foods. The size of the great houses was one of the evidence about using it, in order to save the maize for a long time. The lecture refutes this theories in terms of : a large empty room could be used as a food storage but the excavation of the great houses haven't uncovered any traces of the maize or maize container. Moreover, there is no any spoiled maize in the floor or any big containers.
Finally, using of the great houses as a ceremonious center explained in the article with some evidences as: the excavation of the mound reveals that it contains a large numbers of broken pots; That, means the people were ate there meals and through the pots that formed the mound. In addition to, such a ceremonies have been documented for other native American cultures. The author disprove this idea through the many arguments such as the mound was full of sand and stones of building materials, even constructions tools; where, the mound is just a trash heap of stuff thrones away by the worker when the house was being build.
In conclusions the three theories that proved by the articles has been defeated by the lecture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 10.4613686534 210% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 30.3222958057 165% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1928.0 1373.03311258 140% => OK
No of words: 399.0 270.72406181 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8320802005 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.04702891845 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5098605539 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 145.348785872 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491228070175 0.540411800872 91% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 419.366225166 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.2447127723 49.2860985944 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.111111111 110.228320801 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 21.698381199 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94444444444 7.06452816374 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.09492273731 147% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 4.19205298013 477% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.431660631462 0.272083759551 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117071252906 0.0996497079465 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698910736874 0.0662205650399 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186960743721 0.162205337803 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057138458477 0.0443174109184 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.3589403974 93% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 53.8541721854 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.2367328918 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 63.6247240618 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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