In the reading author expresses three criticism that have been present by crises about memoir written by Chevalier de Seingalt however, in the lecture professor refutes all them and approve accuracy and reliability of these memoir by giving more clear evidences to solve unacceptable reason using by author to reject accuracy of memoir.
First, reading casts doubt about if he was a wealthy person or not?
author says Chevalier had borrowed a huge money of a merchant that this shows he need money. Professor expresses he had so many posses property and real estate but converting them to currency wasn't easy so he borrowed money for a short time until sold his asset.
Second crisis which author expresses is about accuracy of conversation between him and Voltair which have been written many years later by him. Author says those text are Chevalier's specter not real events. Professor says he always wrote everything they said at their conversation then conserve those notes for a long time until writing them as a book.
Finally, author says story of Chevalier's fugitive of prison by piercing ceiling using a metal isn't real because he had some political influence friend helped him to bribe jailers and be free. Professor states that there were other prisoner who had more powerful freinds but couldn't bribe to be free additionally some government report on that time shows his cell need repair that shows he make a hole in his cell.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 219, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this memoir' or 'these memoirs'?
Suggestion: this memoir; these memoirs
...and approve accuracy and reliability of these memoir by giving more clear evidences to solve...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Author
...out if he was a wealthy person or not? author says Chevalier had borrowed a huge mone...
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Line 3, column 36, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'huge money'.
Suggestion: huge money
...ot? author says Chevalier had borrowed a huge money of a merchant that this shows he need m...
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Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'posses'' or 'poss's', 'posse's'?
Suggestion: posses'; poss's; posse's
...ney. Professor expresses he had so many posses property and real estate but converting...
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Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
... estate but converting them to currency wasnt easy so he borrowed money for a short t...
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Line 4, column 156, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this text' or 'those texts'?
Suggestion: this text; those texts
...en many years later by him. Author says those text are Chevaliers specter not real events....
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Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...rison by piercing ceiling using a metal isnt real because he had some political inf...
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Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng a metal isnt real because he had some political influence friend helped him to...
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Line 5, column 276, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...soner who had more powerful freinds but couldnt bribe to be free additionally some gove...
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Line 5, column 391, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
...hows his cell need repair that shows he make a hole in his cell.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'then']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.287401574803 0.261695866417 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.192913385827 0.158904122519 121% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0787401574803 0.0723426182421 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0433070866142 0.0435111971325 100% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0708661417323 0.0277247811725 256% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122047244094 0.128828473217 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0511811023622 0.0370669169778 138% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.43239652012 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0196850393701 0.0208969081088 94% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0708661417323 0.128158765124 55% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00393700787402 0.0158828679856 25% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0196850393701 0.0114777025283 172% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1446.0 1645.83664459 88% => OK
No of words: 242.0 271.125827815 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.97520661157 6.08160592843 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.04852973271 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.355371900826 0.374372842146 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.243801652893 0.287516216867 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.161157024793 0.187439937562 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.095041322314 0.113142543107 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43239652012 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619834710744 0.539623497131 115% => OK
Word variations: 65.696606174 53.8517498576 122% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0529801325 69% => OK
Sentence length: 26.8888888889 21.7502111507 124% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.527697331 49.3711431718 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.666666667 132.220823453 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8888888889 21.7502111507 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.888888888889 0.878197800319 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 3.39072847682 295% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 51.2690541781 50.5018328374 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.5 1.90840788429 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386562021246 0.549887131256 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0781899684046 0.142949733639 55% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0546985648105 0.0787303798458 69% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.687326456359 0.631733273073 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.200772290089 0.139662658121 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135768147888 0.266732575781 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105504036922 0.103435571967 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.090401313896 0.414875509568 22% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0477291896147 0.0530846634433 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190862417695 0.40443939384 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113918249655 0.0528353158467 216% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.26048565121 70% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.49668874172 114% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.62251655629 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.1766004415 94% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.2958057395 87% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.