The article states that fuel cell- engines have several benefits over internal- combustion engines and will soon replace them. The author provides three reasons of supports. However, the professor states that though oil engines do have many drawbacks, such as finite resources, polltuions, the fuel-cell engines would not solve these problems. And she refutes each of the author's reasons.
First, the reading avers that the hydrogen needed for fuel-cell engines cannot easily be depleted. Conversely, the professor states that the hydrogen is not available source as the author would like us to believe. She says water is not the direct source to get the hydrogen, but it derives from pure liquid state. This artificate is so difficult to produce and store. For example, in order to keep the pure liquid state, it should store in cold conditions, in particular a very highly temperature. This thing is hard to achieve with labs technology.
Second, the article claims that hydrogen-based fuel will solve the many of the world's pollution problems. The professor refute this point by stating that fuel-cell engines will not solve pollution problems. According to the professor during the process of purfication of the hydrogen, a highly energy will be needed, such as burining coal or oil. As a result, factories that responsible for producing the hydrogen will pollute the air and not by cars emit.
Third, the reading posits that fuel-cell engines will soon be economically competitive. the professor, on the other hand, opposes this point by saying that the hydrogen-based fuel is not cheap.she explains that during the manfacturing process, companies should use platinum element to undergoes the chemical reaction of the hydrogen to produce the engery. This platinum element is rare and so expensive. Also, she says when the companies use other elements to replace the expensive platimun, thei attempts went unsuccessful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 80, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...n-based fuel will solve the many of the worlds pollution problems. The professor refut...
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Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'refutes'.
Suggestion: refutes
...orlds pollution problems. The professor refute this point by stating that fuel-cell en...
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Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('highly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('energy') instead of another adjective.
...process of purfication of the hydrogen, a highly energy will be needed, such as burining coal o...
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Line 7, column 89, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... will soon be economically competitive. the professor, on the other hand, opposes t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, however, if, second, so, third, for example, in particular, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1373.03311258 119% => OK
No of words: 305.0 270.72406181 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33770491803 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73162965851 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 145.348785872 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534426229508 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 419.366225166 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.4116246177 49.2860985944 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4444444444 110.228320801 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9444444444 21.698381199 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06452816374 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.447948668428 0.272083759551 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141888275624 0.0996497079465 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147107863472 0.0662205650399 222% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282936801225 0.162205337803 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788227883684 0.0443174109184 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.3589403974 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.2367328918 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 63.6247240618 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.