The lecture and essay discusses about efficient source for automobiles main power source. The lecturer provides three disadvantages of hydrogen powered cell as a source of power. Conversely, passage supports hydrogen powered cell as an effective power source for engine and provides three advantages of same.
Firstly, according to the article hydrogen cell does not have to rely on non-renewable resources such as gasoline or diesel. This is because, hydrogen cannot be easily depleted and can be derived from multiple resources. On the other hand, the orator posits that although, hydrogen is present in abundance, it has to be derived in pure form from water. Moreover, it's difficult to generate and store hydrogen at such low temperatures. It is not at all practical to use it as a source of power for engines.
Second, the author states that hydrogen cell power is environment friendly. It does not contribute to pollution, as, it's bi-product is water. Unlike gasoline or diesel whose, bi-product is carbon monoxide which, is a very harmful pollutant. The lecturer refutes this claim and states that even though cars with hydrogen cell power source would not emit carbon monoxide as a bi-product, the factories manufacturing these hydrogen cell will emit a large amount of pollutants. Thus, it would not solve the problem of pollution either.
Finally, the text mentions that hydrogen power cells are twice efficient and inexpensive than the internal combustion source. However, professor argues that hydrogen power cells require platinum in order to generate energy, which is a very expensive metal. Additionally, there aren't any successful replacement available for platinum as a chemical reactor with hydrogen in order to reduce the cost of hydrogen cells. So hydrogen cell has many demerits as a effective source of power for car engines.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 415, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this hydrogen' or 'these hydrogens'?
Suggestion: this hydrogen; these hydrogens
...bi-product, the factories manufacturing these hydrogen cell will emit a large amount of pollut...
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Line 7, column 278, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...ry expensive metal. Additionally, there arent any successful replacement available fo...
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Line 7, column 455, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
.... So hydrogen cell has many demerits as a effective source of power for car engin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, so, thus, as to, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1373.03311258 114% => OK
No of words: 294.0 270.72406181 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3231292517 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80468732628 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 145.348785872 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544217687075 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 419.366225166 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5467385951 49.2860985944 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0588235294 110.228320801 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2941176471 21.698381199 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 7.06452816374 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387233784692 0.272083759551 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129543867939 0.0996497079465 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725980006452 0.0662205650399 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235378646509 0.162205337803 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303089126619 0.0443174109184 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.3589403974 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.8541721854 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.2367328918 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 63.6247240618 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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