The reading and the lecture both discuss replacement fuel for cars. While the reading states that by using hydrogen as fuel, it creates electricity because hydrogen based on fuel- cell and has many advantages. The lecture refutes this, saying that hydrogen is a finite resource and oil is fuel resource.
First, the reading claims that one problem is internal -combustion engine depends on Petroleum. According to the reading, hydrogen includes water and natural gas and easily available and does not finish anytime .However ,the lecture argues that hydrogen not easily available and it creates by processes and according to the professor technologically difficult to produce and also keeps very cold about 253zero.
In addition, the reading makes the arguments that hydrogen based on cell and can solve pollution because the reading said carbon dioxide burned by oil and water is created by fuel -cell and does not harmful. The lectures counter this point by stating that using hydrogen not solve problems that associated with cars and for this car should be using purification presses to burn oil and gas and it cause a lot of pollution.
Lastly, the reading passage argues that fuel-cell become economically and people like to spend less money to operate fuel-cell engine .The lecture refutes this claim there won't necessary to cost saving when the manufacturer considers expensive fuel-cell
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'lastly', 'so', 'while', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.299180327869 0.261695866417 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.196721311475 0.158904122519 124% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0532786885246 0.0723426182421 74% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0573770491803 0.0435111971325 132% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0122950819672 0.0277247811725 44% => OK
Prepositions: 0.102459016393 0.128828473217 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0491803278689 0.0370669169778 133% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.54713956477 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0286885245902 0.0208969081088 137% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0860655737705 0.128158765124 67% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00819672131148 0.0158828679856 52% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0122950819672 0.0114777025283 107% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1404.0 1645.83664459 85% => OK
No of words: 226.0 271.125827815 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.21238938053 6.08160592843 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.04852973271 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.398230088496 0.374372842146 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.318584070796 0.287516216867 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.185840707965 0.187439937562 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.115044247788 0.113142543107 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54713956477 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 145.348785872 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557522123894 0.539623497131 103% => OK
Word variations: 52.9542283384 53.8517498576 98% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0529801325 61% => OK
Sentence length: 28.25 21.7502111507 130% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.0647337924 49.3711431718 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.5 132.220823453 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.25 21.7502111507 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.878197800319 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 3.39072847682 265% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 60.1084070796 50.5018328374 119% => OK
Elegance: 1.69230769231 1.90840788429 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.570277709283 0.549887131256 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.151806730654 0.142949733639 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0678734675677 0.0787303798458 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.716957364292 0.631733273073 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.187342315623 0.139662658121 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.321656800092 0.266732575781 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065048237935 0.103435571967 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.361726770775 0.414875509568 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0761774285482 0.0530846634433 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.40552768989 0.40443939384 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608930875597 0.0528353158467 115% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.26048565121 47% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.49668874172 114% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.62251655629 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.1766004415 63% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.2958057395 78% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.