Nowadays, the majority of families like to go on vacation as sightseeing .Some family especially rich and leisure likes to go foreign country for spending enjoy the time, much other think goes on vacation in the own country more enjoyable and more fun .As far as I concern, traveling in the own country more advantages than going on vacation on abroad. The most important reasons that listed below, represent my claim.
First of all, going on vacation in the own country helps people to save money.In my country, we have lots of place for sightseeing or other entertainment .On the weekend especially holidays people by their families and own vehicle go on vacation after that they do not need to spend money to buy foods or fruits .For example, when we want to go north of my country my mother always cooking food and prepare many snake and fruits for vacation because of more relax and do not need to spend money to buy. Additionally, going travel in his own country more advantages than forging country because in the own country we have many facilities such as the own car, the price of goods very cheap and we have lots of information about the variety of cities and so on.
Second, traveling in the own country more enjoyable .Most of the families when to want to go on vacation they set a time to go by their colleague or friend's family because they make a decision where they go and how can spend more fun time .Moreover, on vacation, they have the same culture because they can speak the same language and play joke with each other vice versa forging country. The vast majority of families choose a place where has many facilities and free service to spend more fun time such as grass field for playing children and teenager or free parking. So, going on vacation in the own country by friends and acquaintances is more fun.
To make it brief, traveling in the own country has many advantages such as saving money and more enjoyable. Therefore, I believe that going on vacation especially in the own country improve our experience and knowledge about other people by different culture and behavior.
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'such as', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.262626262626 0.229887763892 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.141414141414 0.158761421928 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.111111111111 0.0866891130778 128% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0580808080808 0.046263068375 126% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0530303030303 0.0685040099705 77% => OK
Prepositions: 0.146464646465 0.118717715034 123% => OK
Participles: 0.0378787878788 0.0351676179071 108% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.46897004838 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0328282828283 0.0309702414327 106% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0631313131313 0.0887237588012 71% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00505050505051 0.0209618222197 24% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0151515151515 0.0139019557991 109% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2111.0 2387.08602151 88% => OK
No of words: 372.0 408.028673835 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6747311828 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.298387096774 0.338922669872 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.252688172043 0.251872472559 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.155913978495 0.174417080927 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0833333333333 0.112833075102 74% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46897004838 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.443548387097 0.524397521467 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.9901162371 59.2087087015 78% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6684587814 44% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 41.3333333333 20.5533526081 201% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 143.317828619 48.84282405 293% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 234.555555556 120.699889404 194% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.3333333333 20.5533526081 201% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.644075263715 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.54480286738 252% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 66.6021505376 45.7405998639 146% => OK
Elegance: 1.77 1.45489161554 122% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279982436949 0.300154397459 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.143047669403 0.103427244359 138% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0755786415826 0.0752933317313 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.677498159732 0.497263757937 136% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.200506334956 0.151897553556 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154746475472 0.114077575197 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540212271289 0.0781384742642 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.472896690439 0.336927656856 140% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.057245841551 0.067059652881 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218265933847 0.210909579961 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00787036886669 0.0618886996521 13% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 9.0 13.6433691756 66% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.