TPO 1, Integrated Task
The passage examines different aspects of the society which are impacted by establishing a four day week culture and strongly believes that these changes are all for good. On a different view professor's statements which were mentioned in the lecture oppose the three main points which were illustrated in the passage
First of all, a four day work week does seem to effect company's profit in a significant way. Although the passage mentions that forming a four day work week culture not only doesn't harm company's profit, but it also enhances it. Professor clearly contradicts this point by stating that there are more aspects involved in the final cost of an employee who is only working four days a week; it is true that this employee will get less salary but there are some costs which are inevitable for the company, like costs associated with training and extra equipment, and ultimately decreases company's profit.
Secondly, forming a four day work week culture is not going to increase the employment rate in a positive way. The author of the passage believes that with people working less in a week, more opportunities will rise for people who are currently unemployed but it doesn't seem to be the reality, according to the professor. Professor mentions that companies are not going to use this opportunity to hire more people who are currently unemployed; since they don't want to increase the costs associated with hiring new people, they choose to pressure their current employees to work overtime and even worst make them to deliver the same amount of work and efficiency they were delivering while working five days a week.
Finally, it doesn't seem that working for less days in a week is going to improve employee's well being and life. The passage states that employees working less will have more time to spend with family and friends and that is something that professor agrees with but there are other aspects of life that can also impacts employee's life like earning potential. Professor believes that people working less are less likely to be promoted or even worst lose their jobs when the economy is down.
Overall, it seems that although working for less days in a week has some benefits, there are some aspects that needs to be seriously
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 317, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ts which were illustrated in the passage First of all, a four day work week does ...
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Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a significant way" with adverb for "significant"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...eek does seem to effect companys profit in a significant way. Although the passage mentions that for...
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Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...g a four day work week culture not only doesnt harm companys profit, but it also enhan...
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Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...t going to increase the employment rate in a positive way. The author of the passage believes tha...
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Line 5, column 264, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ple who are currently unemployed but it doesnt seem to be the reality, according to th...
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Line 5, column 456, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ho are currently unemployed; since they dont want to increase the costs associated w...
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Line 5, column 592, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'even the worst'.
Suggestion: even the worst
... current employees to work overtime and even worst make them to deliver the same amount of...
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Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...orking five days a week. Finally, it doesnt seem that working for less days in a we...
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Line 7, column 42, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun days is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...inally, it doesnt seem that working for less days in a week is going to improve empl...
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Line 9, column 45, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun days is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...all, it seems that although working for less days in a week has some benefits, there...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'first of all', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.233415233415 0.261695866417 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.218673218673 0.158904122519 138% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0737100737101 0.0723426182421 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0565110565111 0.0435111971325 130% => OK
Pronouns: 0.029484029484 0.0277247811725 106% => OK
Prepositions: 0.105651105651 0.128828473217 82% => OK
Participles: 0.0687960687961 0.0370669169778 186% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.45413521972 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.034398034398 0.0208969081088 165% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0958230958231 0.128158765124 75% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00982800982801 0.0158828679856 62% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.027027027027 0.0114777025283 235% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2268.0 1645.83664459 138% => OK
No of words: 384.0 271.125827815 142% => OK
Chars per words: 5.90625 6.08160592843 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.04852973271 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.322916666667 0.374372842146 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.270833333333 0.287516216867 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.177083333333 0.187439937562 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.104166666667 0.113142543107 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45413521972 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 145.348785872 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466145833333 0.539623497131 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 49.3089851536 53.8517498576 92% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0529801325 84% => OK
Sentence length: 34.9090909091 21.7502111507 161% => OK
Sentence length SD: 95.652176363 49.3711431718 194% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 206.181818182 132.220823453 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.9090909091 21.7502111507 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.09090909091 0.878197800319 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 3.39072847682 295% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 61.9924242424 50.5018328374 123% => OK
Elegance: 1.33870967742 1.90840788429 70% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.549887131256 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.185313930298 0.142949733639 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0703691317282 0.0787303798458 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.680528723755 0.631733273073 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.161969523926 0.139662658121 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.266732575781 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.103435571967 0% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.353815622833 0.414875509568 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0517225793033 0.0530846634433 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.40443939384 0% => The content is off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0528353158467 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.26048565121 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 3.49668874172 229% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.62251655629 83% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.1766004415 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 11.0 10.2958057395 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Less content wanted. Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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