TPO 1 - Intergrated:
4 days working instead of 5 day
In the reading, the author claims that four-day working day, with less payment, is more efficient rather than five days working day which is the way currently exist by pointing out 3 reasons of support. However, finding all the ideas implausible and questionable, the lecturer casts doubt on what is presented in the text and demonstrate some evidences to the contrary.
At first, the author argues that four days working leads to generating more income due to a reduction in both payroll expenditures and costly human errors. Conversely, the lecturer brings up the idea that the new workforce necessitates further expenses including training and medical insurance. Indeed, the medical cost has nothing to do with the length of time that personnel works which means all the expenses will not cut off by the 80%. Moreover, the more employees work, the more office space and equipment such as computers need. Undoubtedly, all of these items deteriorate the financial status of the companies owing to a fall in profits.
In addition, the reading passage holds the view that on the country scale, a drop in unemployment rates is accounted as a constructive consequence of this approach. On the other hand, the lecturer, disputes this point by clarifying the fact that as he said before, the companies are reluctant to not have extra workers. Consequently, having worked less time, the current staffs are required to work overtime since the employers presume they should do the same duties which had been assign in five days working. Therefore, not only does not this decision decrease the unemployment rate, but also it makes the current employees much less contentment of their job.
Finally, the author asserts enhance the quality of their personal life as they have more time to allocate their favorable activities. The lecturer, though, dismisses it by pointing out that the stability in jobs gradually has been adversely affected by raising the possibility of firing out. Beside this issue that the employees who work 4 days instead of 5 days pass up their chance for promotions because employers opt to offer this opportunity to those who work more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, conversely, finally, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 30.3222958057 155% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1373.03311258 131% => OK
No of words: 354.0 270.72406181 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09322033898 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7180264854 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 145.348785872 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604519774011 0.540411800872 112% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 419.366225166 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 14.0 8.23620309051 170% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7970964568 49.2860985944 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 128.785714286 110.228320801 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 21.698381199 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06452816374 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273457632947 0.272083759551 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07928926038 0.0996497079465 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122806615903 0.0662205650399 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178114015024 0.162205337803 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879236106752 0.0443174109184 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.3589403974 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.42419426049 109% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 63.6247240618 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.7273730684 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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