tpo 1 Q1
The reading and the lecture discusses the pros and cons of online encyclopedias and the traditional one. The author of the passage feels that there are three reasons for the traditional encyclopedia being more valuable. The lecturer challenges the claims made by the author. he is of the opinion that the explanations are faulty.
Firstly, the communal type lacks academic credentials and are partly informed as well as inaccurate. The article mentions that the printed version is written by trained expects and they adhere to standards required. this statement is challenged by the lecturer .he claims that no work is free from errors .The printed errors cannot be corrected whereas the online mistakes can be rectified.
Secondly, the writer mentions that unscrupulous users or hackers can delete or fabricate information which would be eventually difficult to notice if its tampered with. While, the book has no such trouble. The lecturer however, rebuts this by referring that there are strategies like inclusion of crucial information in the read only format and special editors who can eliminate wrong information entered.
Thirdly, it is suggested by the author that online version may focus on trivial and popular topics creating a false impression. Likewise, the written version decides what to be included and excluded. In contrast, the lecturer says that a variety of topics directed to the users interest can be found in online version which is the strongest advantage of online over traditional.
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| 2019-08-14 | Rasna James | 3 | view |
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- Scientists are considering the possibility of sending humans to Mars in the coming decades Although there have been successful manned missions to the Moon in the 1960s and 1970s Mars is 150 times further away from Earth than the Moon is Thus the project o
- communal online encyclopedia 85
- All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. 66
- television advertising directed towards young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d the traditional one. The author of the passage feels that there are three reaso...
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Line 1, column 222, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ional encyclopedia being more valuable. The lecturer challenges the claims made by ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...allenges the claims made by the author. he is of the opinion that the explanations...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... and they adhere to standards required. this statement is challenged by the lecturer...
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Suggestion: .
... statement is challenged by the lecturer .he claims that no work is free from erro...
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Suggestion: .
... claims that no work is free from errors .The printed errors cannot be corrected w...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...laims that no work is free from errors .The printed errors cannot be corrected wher...
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...fficult to notice if its tampered with. While, the book has no such trouble. The lect...
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Suggestion:
...an eliminate wrong information entered. Thirdly, it is suggested by the author t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, likewise, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, whereas, while, in contrast, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1373.03311258 94% => OK
No of words: 240.0 270.72406181 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78227275203 2.5805825403 108% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 145.348785872 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.540411800872 111% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 419.366225166 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.7064880365 49.2860985944 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7692307692 110.228320801 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4615384615 21.698381199 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06452816374 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.8541721854 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.2367328918 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.42419426049 116% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 63.6247240618 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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