TPO 10
The reading passage claims that endotherms are animals that keep their body temperatures constant and it is assumed that Dinosaurs are not endotherms but there are several reasons that suggest they are endotherms like modern reptiles. However, the lecturer finds all the ideas dubious and presents some evidence to refute them all.
First, the author contends that fossils of Dinosaur have been found in the polar region where the climate is so cold there. On the contrary, the lecturer brings up the idea that many years ago Polar Regions were warmer and dinosaur could have migrated or hibernated during cold weather.
Furthermore, the author holds the view that movement and legs positioned underneath the body of dinosaurs represent a connection between endotherm and movement. Conversely, the professor underlines the fact that legs underneath the body of dinosaurs support more weight that is advantageous for dinosaurs.
Finally, as set forth by the author bone structures and the presence of Haversian canals that improve the growth of dinosaur strongly suggest that they are endotherms. In contrast, the speaker dismisses this issue due to the fact that despite bones and Haversian canals, dinosaurs have growth rings that indicate the process of dinosaurs' growth. In fact, this process is a hallmark of not endotherm animals.
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- Some people believe that the best way of learning about life is by listening to the advice of family and friends. Other people believe that the best way of learning about life is through personal experience. Which do you prefer? 76
- Children at age 15 or 16 should do part-time jobe.Do you agree or disagree? 73
- Claim: Major policy decisions should always be left to politicians and other government experts.Reason: Politicians and other government experts are more informed and thus have better judgment and perspective than do members of the general public. 66
- Never never give up, means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree? 70
- Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Other moves a number of times throughout their lives. Which do you prefer? 76
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, finally, first, furthermore, however, so, in contrast, in fact, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 30.3222958057 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1136.0 1373.03311258 83% => OK
No of words: 211.0 270.72406181 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38388625592 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61577887822 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 145.348785872 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60663507109 0.540411800872 112% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 419.366225166 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9572960712 49.2860985944 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.222222222 110.228320801 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 21.698381199 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06452816374 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0516731955665 0.272083759551 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0224602305666 0.0996497079465 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0155743993414 0.0662205650399 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0307916581693 0.162205337803 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0142869960265 0.0443174109184 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.3589403974 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.2367328918 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.42419426049 113% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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