With the increased use of computers in our daily lives, computer games are becoming more popular these days. Some people believe that playing computer games is a source of entertainment for their children in their free time but others believe that computer games are just waste of time. In my opinion, Children should not be encouraged to play compuer games as they are waste of time. I feel this for two reasons which i will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, children prefer to play computer games in their homes and avoid going out to play physical games. As children’s interest in these computer games is increasing day by day, children spend their free time playing these games. They do not want to play physical games like soccer, badminton etc with their friends and thus, spending most of their time sitting at one place. I feel that physical games play an important part in the growth and development of children. I can give an example to illustrate this. My ten-year-old niece loves playing Ben 10 computer game. She is so much obssesed with this game that after coming back from school and finishing her homework, she spends her free time only playing this game on her computer without bothering to go out and meeting her friends. As a result, she does not play any physical game with her friends.
Moreover, these computer games have a large impact on the immature minds of children and influences their personality development. Spending most of their time playing these computer games, children get influenced by these video games. As children are in their devloping years, so, it is very easy for them to grasp the traits of their favourite characters from these computer games. For instance, my younger brother loves to play violent computer games. He spends 8 hours a day playing theses computer games. As he spends most of his time playing these violent games, his personality traits have become more violent. His teacher has complained that he has become more violent in recent months and instead of getting punished for his violent behavior, he is not changing his behavior. I feel that his violent behavior is contributed by these violent computer games.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that computer games are waste of time. I feel this because this discourages children to go out and play physical games and because these games affect the personality of children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, so, thus, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 66.0 22.412803532 294% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 30.3222958057 171% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2003.0 1373.03311258 146% => OK
No of words: 407.0 270.72406181 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92137592138 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.04702891845 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51601850384 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 145.348785872 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.449631449631 0.540411800872 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 610.2 419.366225166 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 3.25607064018 553% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 13.0662251656 168% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.6974950584 49.2860985944 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0454545455 110.228320801 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 21.698381199 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68181818182 7.06452816374 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 4.33554083885 277% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0582751247691 0.272083759551 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0244439582237 0.0996497079465 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0153961825876 0.0662205650399 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0450162511866 0.162205337803 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0124060084564 0.0443174109184 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.3589403974 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.42419426049 85% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 63.6247240618 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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