From the passage we know peole are less reading literature than they used to. However, they lecture hold the opposite opinions from three aspects.
The writer argues that people nowadays are missing out on the benefits of literature because of the less reading literature. While the professor conveys that there are lots of other high quality medias to stimulate us imagaination as same level as the literature.
What's more, the passage hold the opinion that it alos has lead the lowered the level of culture in general. On the contry, teh listening meterial mention that noadays the form of culture has been changed, instead of the literature, music and movie have more culture even than the literature.
In addition, that people blame the reader they not reading the literature, however, the professor argue that that is the althor's falte. In the past peopel prefer to reading more literature is because the passage is much more easiler to read. But nowadays it has become much more difficult to read.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...ion as same level as the literature. Whats more, the passage hold the opinion that...
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Line 7, column 166, Rule ID: PREFER_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'read'?
Suggestion: read
...ors falte. In the past peopel prefer to reading more literature is because the passage ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while, as to, in addition, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 22.412803532 62% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 30.3222958057 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 1373.03311258 62% => OK
No of words: 168.0 270.72406181 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02976190476 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 4.04702891845 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42593665432 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 145.348785872 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559523809524 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 419.366225166 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7794117294 49.2860985944 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8888888889 110.228320801 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 21.698381199 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06452816374 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387475421902 0.272083759551 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164978332594 0.0996497079465 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121273902416 0.0662205650399 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223865624612 0.162205337803 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738566639712 0.0443174109184 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.3589403974 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.8541721854 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 63.6247240618 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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