The article discusses a portrait that owned by family member of the famous english novelist Jane Austen is represent Jane as a teenage girl. and provides three reasons of support. However, the professor explains that evidences are not convincing and hard to proof. He refutes each of the author’s reasons.
First, the reading states that Austen’s family has endorsed the claim that the girl in the portrait is Jane. The professor oppposes this point by stating that family members who believe the portrait is Jane have never seen her, therefore, you could not confirm that was Jane. For the reason that she died 70 years before the portrait become available to sell.
Second, the article avers that the girl’s face in the portrait is so much similar to Casandra’s’ sketch. Casandra was a Jane’s sister who depict Austin when she was an adult. On the other hand , the professor refutes this point by stating that the girl in the painting could be one of Jane’s relative. He emphasizes that Austen’s extending family is so large, so it could be one of her relative teenage, which he suggests it could be a niece of Jane, resembled her in this portrait.
Third, the article claims that even though the painting is unsigned or undated, there is a solid evidence it was Jane by depending on style of the painting. The professor explains that the style of the painting is refers to Ozias Humphrey is true. However, he says that by checking the type of the Canvas, the clothes are used by painter to portrait, was not being for sell in London in 1882. In fact, it was started after 27 years, and Consequently, Jane Austen was clearly older than the girl in the portrait
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'represented'.
Suggestion: represented
... famous english novelist Jane Austen is represent Jane as a teenage girl. and provides th...
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Line 1, column 142, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...en is represent Jane as a teenage girl. and provides three reasons of support. Howe...
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Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...when she was an adult. On the other hand , the professor refutes this point by sta...
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Line 5, column 360, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lative. He emphasizes that Austen's extending family is so large, so it coul...
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Line 7, column 366, Rule ID: FOR_SELL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'for sale'?
Suggestion: for sale
...d by painter to portrait, was not being for sell in London in 1882. In fact, it was star...
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Line 7, column 433, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... In fact, it was started after 27 years, and Consequently, Jane Austen was clearl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, second, so, therefore, third, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 10.4613686534 210% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1373.03311258 104% => OK
No of words: 288.0 270.72406181 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96875 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03706110199 2.5805825403 118% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 145.348785872 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534722222222 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 419.366225166 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0315225621 49.2860985944 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4 110.228320801 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 21.698381199 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06452816374 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.430762610598 0.272083759551 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147110016841 0.0996497079465 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112578601914 0.0662205650399 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285691573322 0.162205337803 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433193472022 0.0443174109184 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.3589403974 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.2367328918 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 63.6247240618 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.