Both the reading and the lecture talk about the validity of a well-depicted full-sized portrait of Jane Austen, an English great novelist. Although the reading states some reasons that the subject of the picture is Jane Austen, the lecturer finds them unconvincing and provides three counter reasons to refute them all.
First, the author claims that Austen's family have asserted that the teenage girl is Jane after authorized publication of her letters. On the other hand, the lecturer opposes this notion by stating that Jane Austen had been dead for more than 70 years when they made this claim about the portrait. Thus, it is impossible that her family could have visited Austen.
Second, the reading explains that this portrait resembles to the picture of a teenage girl sketched by Jane's sister, Cassandra, when she was a teenager. However, according to the lecture, Austen had an extended family and relatives who could have been the subject of this portrait. The girl could have been either one of her relatives or children who looked like her the most or one of her relatives called Merry who were with her everywhere.
Third, the reading argues that the style of the picture belongs to an artist named Ozias Humphery who was hired by Austen's family when she was a teenager. In contrast, the lecturer denies this fact by citing that the style date later since the evidence of a stamp found in the back of the canvass cleared more facts. These canvass were only sold by a man named William Leg. After much investigations, it turned out that he didn't sell canvass at the time Austen was a teenager in London. He started selling his product when Austen was 27 years old. Thus, this picture could not have been Austen's face.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion:
...o looked like her the most or one of her relatives called Merry who were with her...
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Suggestion: many
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...h investigations, it turned out that he didnt sell canvass at the time Austen was a t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, look, second, so, third, thus, well, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1373.03311258 105% => OK
No of words: 298.0 270.72406181 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81543624161 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.349149084 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523489932886 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 419.366225166 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7700974247 49.2860985944 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 110.228320801 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 21.698381199 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06452816374 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.483717914125 0.272083759551 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178288455504 0.0996497079465 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848687682501 0.0662205650399 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.300610523402 0.162205337803 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450112368661 0.0443174109184 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.3589403974 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.2367328918 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 63.6247240618 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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