The reading and listening passages are discussing about amphibiens and their transporation form South America to Australia.
The reading passage states that one way to prevent them from spreading toads are fences but the speaker casts doubt on this idea and it states taht fence can only prevent from spreading young toads.
Moreover, it was done by a massive group of volunteers by their hand. The only problem was that they do not know the difference between frog and Toad's egg.
Furthermore, the reading states that viruses taht were introduced by researchers in South Australia will help,viruses which are not harmful to every type of amphibians will help.Viruses that was introduced by resarchers in South america. May be it caused the echological disaster that we have now, due to the fact that from south America researchers brought them or pet collector brought them.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: May be it caused the echological disaster that we have now, due to the fact that from south America researchers brought them or pet collector brought them.
Description: A verb 'to be', infinitive or imperative is not usually followed by a pronoun, personal, nominative, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to be and it
Sentence: The reading and listening passages are discussing about amphibiens and their transporation form South America to Australia.
Error: transporation Suggestion: transportation
Error: amphibiens Suggestion: amphibians
Sentence: The reading passage states that one way to prevent them from spreading toads are fences but the speaker casts doubt on this idea and it states taht fence can only prevent from spreading young toads.
Error: taht Suggestion: tact
Sentence: Furthermore, the reading states that viruses taht were introduced by researchers in South Australia will help,viruses which are not harmful to every type of amphibians will help.Viruses that was introduced by resarchers in South america.
Error: taht Suggestion: tact
Error: america Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: resarchers Suggestion: researchers
Sentence: May be it caused the echological disaster that we have now, due to the fact that from south America researchers brought them or pet collector brought them.
Error: echological Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2
Double check spelling errors.
No. of Words: 145 250
Minimum 150 words wanted
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 15 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2
No. of Sentences: 6 12
No. of Words: 145 250
No. of Characters: 720 1200
No. of Different Words: 92 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.47 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.966 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.569 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 47 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 41 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 22 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 19 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.167 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.424 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.437 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.81 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.109 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... amphibiens and their transporation form South America to Australia. The readi...
^^
Line 7, column 110, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , viruses
...researchers in South Australia will help,viruses which are not harmful to every type of ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 179, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Viruses
...l to every type of amphibians will help.Viruses that was introduced by resarchers in So...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 239, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: Maybe
...roduced by resarchers in South america. May be it caused the echological disaster that...
^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'furthermore', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.292207792208 0.261695866417 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.188311688312 0.158904122519 119% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0519480519481 0.0723426182421 72% => OK
Adverbs: 0.038961038961 0.0435111971325 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0649350649351 0.0277247811725 234% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123376623377 0.128828473217 96% => OK
Participles: 0.038961038961 0.0370669169778 105% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.73468599778 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.025974025974 0.0208969081088 124% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0779220779221 0.128158765124 61% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0194805194805 0.0158828679856 123% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00649350649351 0.0114777025283 57% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 882.0 1645.83664459 54% => OK
No of words: 143.0 271.125827815 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.16783216783 6.08160592843 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 4.04852973271 85% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.328671328671 0.374372842146 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.286713286713 0.287516216867 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.174825174825 0.187439937562 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.153846153846 0.113142543107 136% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73468599778 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 145.348785872 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643356643357 0.539623497131 119% => OK
Word variations: 58.2890639326 53.8517498576 108% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 13.0529801325 46% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 23.8333333333 21.7502111507 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4268925282 49.3711431718 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.0 132.220823453 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 21.7502111507 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.878197800319 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.39072847682 118% => OK
Readability: 52.5046620047 50.5018328374 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.55555555556 1.90840788429 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.551163745112 0.549887131256 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0851184809234 0.142949733639 60% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0445415251953 0.0787303798458 57% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.768175695742 0.631733273073 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.175274677117 0.139662658121 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.269172320595 0.266732575781 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757028617052 0.103435571967 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.158329180193 0.414875509568 38% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0228638939864 0.0530846634433 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.330314386769 0.40443939384 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444805057052 0.0528353158467 84% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.26048565121 47% => OK
Positive topic words: 0.0 3.49668874172 0% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.62251655629 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.1766004415 63% => OK
Total topic words: 4.0 10.2958057395 39% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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