TPO 16 Q1
During the last decades the United Kingdom archaeology field has been neglected and not taking care of neither the site’s artifacts nor the scientist themselves that’s depending on the text claims, However, the professor asserts that new rules and guidelines has been established to manage the previous problems, this will lead the professor to refutes each of the text claims.
First, the professor states that the new law states that in order for new construction projects to be carried out at any place, a full examining by an archaeologists is required to determine if the site carry any archaeology interest or value and if it is, the next step would be the government job to discuss whither to build around this site, or to excavate and preserve the site. On the other hand, the text discusses that many valuable artifacts was lost due to new constructions happening at the same place where the artifacts are.
Second, the professor states that a new guideline held the constructions company responsible for paying the expenses of the archaeological researches. This provide more financial support necessary for archaeology projects to be carried out. At the meantime, the text discuss that because of inadequate funding for archaeology project led to less investigation in this field.
Finally, the professor says that all these new guidelines works together to create more jobs and demand for archaeologist. Now archaeologist are needed to supervise every step of construction starting with examining the site for artifacts to processing the data. This led to increasing number of both archaeology sites to be discovered and hired archaeologist for the former purpose. However, the text stats that there used to be no interest between people to study archaeology because of low demand for this science.
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new rules and guidelines has been established
new rules and guidelines have been established
this will lead the professor to refutes each
this will lead the professor to refute each
if the site carry any archaeology interest
if the site carries any archaeology interest
many valuable artifacts was lost
many valuable artifacts were lost
This provide more financial support
This provides more financial support
all these new guidelines works together
all these new guidelines work together
Sentence: Second, the professor states that a new guideline held the constructions company responsible for paying the expenses of the archaeological researches.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to constructions and company
Sentence: At the meantime, the text discuss that because of inadequate funding for archaeology project led to less investigation in this field.
Description: The fragment text discuss that is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace discuss with verb, past tense
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 19 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 12
No. of Words: 292 250
No. of Characters: 1494 1200
No. of Different Words: 158 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.134 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.116 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.925 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 106 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 85 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 62 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 48 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 29.2 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 18.038 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.387 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.574 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.054 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4