In the reading passage, the writer claims that there are three ways to prevent Torreya from dying out. The speaker, however, thinks that none of them will succeed. And she uses the following three reasons to support her view.
First, although the reading passage suggests that reestablishing Torreya in the same area where it has been survived for a long time will be useful because of the microclimate, the speaker argues that it will not survive since the microclimate has been changed. In other words, in this region, it may be wet and cool in the past, but it is influenced by the larger area, and because of global warming, it becomes drier and warmer and very hard for Torreya to survive.
Second, contrary to the statement in the reading passage that by moving Torreya to another area where is cool will helps the survival of it. The speaker points out that it will cause unpredictable results, because when new species be introduced, they may spread out and kill a lot of local plants and trees which are already in danger.
Finally, the writer states that keeping the Torreya in research center will do good to Torreya. But the speaker suggests that Torreya will grow into large and diverse population, but environment like labs are not capable of keeping it in the long term.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: patel dolly
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...reya to another area where is cool will helps the survival of it. The speaker points ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, may, second, so, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 1373.03311258 78% => OK
No of words: 224.0 270.72406181 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76339285714 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4075665627 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 145.348785872 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566964285714 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 419.366225166 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.51434878587 330% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.086457221 49.2860985944 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.555555556 110.228320801 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8888888889 21.698381199 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 7.06452816374 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377512628585 0.272083759551 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151543811951 0.0996497079465 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895246953152 0.0662205650399 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21984279356 0.162205337803 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610793672158 0.0443174109184 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.3589403974 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 53.8541721854 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.2367328918 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 63.6247240618 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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