The article states that experts experts provide proposals to preserve Torreya tree from becoming extinct and provides three wasys of support. However, the porfessorstates that none of these propsals could proivde satisfied soultions and she refutes each of the author's ways.
First, the reading avers that reestablish Torreya in the same location in which it thrived, such as in Florida. The professor, on the other hand, expalins that this way is unlikely to success. Because such cooler and wet areas, micoclimate, have faced strong changes that made by global warming, or wet lands become drier. So, Torreya trees would not have their favorable conditions as they were in their original locations like Florida.
Second, the article claims that by using assisted migration process, Torreya trees will relocate in another locaation far in the North. Conversely, the professor demonstrates one example of migrated assisted process to show how impractical to do so. she says that when humans relocated black loca trees to another place, it spreaded so quickly. And consequently, they killed original plants that inhabit in this place and become extinct. this unpredictable outcomes of asisted migrated process, could devastated the ecosystem in the new environment.
Third, the reading posits that preserving Torreya in research centers, with close monitoring and conducting studies will ensure the survival of the tress. The professor opposes this point by stating that this point is not a soloution at all. By keeping Torrreya trees at these centers, they will exposure to certain diseases. Since they do not disease-resistant, they will not survive. Also, the professor mentions that these trees need large, more genetically diverse species popluations as in wilderness areas in order to thrive. Centers are not capable of inroducing such as this environement or diversity which will make trees die on the long term.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: experts
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Suggestion: devastate
...omes of asisted migrated process, could devastated the ecosystem in the new environment. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, conversely, first, however, second, so, third, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1373.03311258 119% => OK
No of words: 300.0 270.72406181 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42666666667 5.08290768461 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76354040237 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 145.348785872 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613333333333 0.540411800872 113% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 419.366225166 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.5014756341 49.2860985944 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.7647058824 110.228320801 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6470588235 21.698381199 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 7.06452816374 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273538391449 0.272083759551 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809580188504 0.0996497079465 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756739117577 0.0662205650399 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154451288122 0.162205337803 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346997436734 0.0443174109184 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.2367328918 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.42419426049 114% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 63.6247240618 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.